great story i read you bio hope your feeling better and things get better im excited for the next chapter and ill be looking out for it! no rush tho take care of yourself!

Well Weiss, going behind her back and talking to Ozpin is a great way to betray her trust just as she is starting to open up to you.

please update soon author-san.. I need it so bad!

Can't wait till next chapter! So excited!

Yo! Was wondering when you gonna update again?
It's been a while and it's one of my favorites.
Hope to hear from you soon!

When you say you're ending it here. Is the story over? I hope not. I love this Fic! Great job btw

The review is to give opinions, praise, constructive criticism or simply to express an opinion towards the author, in this case, I will give mine, I was disappointed with Yang's reaction, she is known for her incredible temperament and the overprotectiveness she has towards Ruby, I would fight against the whole world for her little sister and her well-being, in my opinion Yang was ooc in this chapter, I expected her to enter with red eyes hitting everyone demanding to know where Mercury was for doing that Ruby or Cinder, such It's not the most sensible time, let alone the most rational considering who Cinder is but that way she would have acted, I have in mind what you said about '' moment and place for everything '' but what better time and place to make that reaction so characteristic of Yang? demonstrating his rowdy temperament, I hope you do not take this to bad, it is not my intention that this sounds toxic or similar, if it is so I want to ask for forgiveness, it is not my intention I just look for my opinion.

It does not mean that I did not like the chapter! I suppose it's just that aspect, I like that you've also focused on the Bumblebee, that way the story can be 50/50 in the relationship, do not you think? Although it also makes me think Ruby and Yang already found their family, I do not know what you will do in the future related to that and the meeting between them, or even the fact that they are named something related to their parents, but what will happen to Blake? ? the sisters have had a great love towards her, a sister in a friendly way and the other in a loving way, I doubt that she will really be alone, but where will she fit in there? I'm curious.

Another thing! I have many but a lot of cravings for how Weiss names Ruby for her parents! Surely he will tell her first that Yang instead of once, because he has more confidence with her, right? I know what a slow process is because of the impact of the news, but how do you approach that issue? I do not think it's in plan '' Hey Ruby! guess! I found your parents and it turns out that they have been looking for you for years! Do you think we're going to hang out with them? "I can not wait to see.

It's been a while since you updated, you're probably busy and I understand it perfectly, you have other things to do, but when you can update please, I love your story and I can not wait to read more, I love it and it's one of the things that have helped me the most Entertaining for its originality and extravagance, I will be waiting very anxiously for you to do it, thanks for writing honey.

That Summer personality I think you interpreted it very well, although we do not know anything about it I think it would be very similar to Ruby, even Raven said it in volume 5, when I started reading the story and could observe the situation in which they were the sisters, I thought you would do the parents in a mean and hateful way, but it's not like that, you did them with a lot of love and concern for their daughters and with a case of post-traumatic stress on Tai's part, which would be normal considering the situation for which he happened, it is completely natural to be blamed, it is curious the reason why Qrow wants to reunite Ruby and Yang with their parents, not in plan "I want to see my nieces again" in place of that '' fulfill the promise I made to them '', I do not say it is wrong only what is curious, I am very interested in how the reactions of the sisters will be, I would like to think that it will be a great part of drama and hatred on the part of sisters, I can not wait to read In part, I know you will do something amazing you have done with the rest of the story.

Did I already tell you that I loved Summer's personality? Yes, surely but I can not stop saying it, that character is adorable, it is super protective and shy, I love it! Thanks for what you do, honey.

First of all, I want to apologize for the previous revision, I wrote it in Spanish, my native language is not English so I have to copy in Spanish a revision and then change the language to give it in English so ... one thing led to the other and I'm not sure if it can be deleted and rewritten, I'm sorry again.

Weiss admitted his feelings for Ruby, yay! Which makes me wonder what it will be like to '' get close to Ruby with her feelings '' is something that I will certainly look forward to! Ruby I do not think she complains, I know it will be a spectacle to see, a Schnee very blushed with a pink ashamed, has a future.

Very intriguing as Qrow wants to have a more extensive talk with Weiss and vice versa, but it makes me think about many things, what other things will we know about poor Ruby? I have a lot of emotion! I'm a fan of your work, thank you for taking your time to write.

Hay cosas interesantes en este capítulo, como por ejemplo que Ruby pueda corregir a Weiss en trigonometría, y teniendo en cuenta que Weiss es bastante estudiosa es una hazaña en sí misma, otra cosa interesante es el hecho de que Weiss sepa todo relacionado al trabajo de Ruby, al parecer ella lo suficiente en ella para contarle todo, lo curioso es que no tiene la confianza de contarle eso a Yang que es su hermana, curioso.

Me diagnosticaran diabetes, lo sé, es todo culpa por el fluffy white rose de tu fanfic (Thank you for that ) es muy mono como Weiss se avergüenza por todo! Me gustaría ver más momentos como este, simboliza de la mejor manera la relación de Ruby y Weiss.

Poor Yang and Ruby, to have passed such a cruel abandonment at such an early age, I do not know if I've said it before but I think you're very original in your story, the extravagance and originality makes someone become addicted to your writing, very good the writing, the dialogs, the plot, everything I love.
Every time I fall more in love with your fic, btw, the unique love of Ruby and Weiss so delicate and pure, the perfect example of teenage love, peculiar to me, thanks for continuing to write, honey.

How much mystery, how much intrigue, my favorite parts of the fic besides the white rose is when that dark side of Ruby comes out, it looks so unnatural, it's extravagant and fascinating at the same time, it awakens the morbid, you know? the story becomes more interesting as it progresses and the development of the characters along with the relationships is excellent, it feels fluid and not at all forced you have a lot of talent to make that happen in a story, this has been one of my chapters Preferred, honey, thank you for taking the time to write, it is very much appreciated.

Oh my God, it will give me diabetes of so much tenderness, despite what history originally interested me by the white rose I love the Bumblebee that you are putting in the story. and the love that Ruby and Yang show is too sweet, anyone would feel envious of that kind of bond, thanks for continuing to write.

Ruby and Weiss fixed things, yay! The touch that you give to Weiss to be loving and kind while still being '' Weiss '' in its way seems incredible, I do not know if I explain well lol, I have a lot of intrigue when Ruby will tell Yang of his plan Take them both out of that life, I'm excited a lot, I just want to keep reading! Thanks for this, Honey.

I like to read that Blake gets along so well with Ruby and Yang, the two sisters show him a lot of affection to be a stranger, and Ruby can not be away from Weiss for a long time, I love it, good chapter btw.