It's not often you see a post-canon view of things like this. Very interesting, and you have good word economy; you got in, told the story you wanted to tell, and got out.

Squeeee!

Wow, it's amazing how you write Tamamo. You really nail how she just isn't human, but keep her loving/teasing character.

This is My God what will happen next

The Feels were intense... Then the end... I was so sad again :(

Tamamo is gonna be people now, isn't she?! :D

Another great chapter. I hope they find her. Can't wait for the next one.

well,this story is really interesting!
i can't wait for the next i hope the wish that hakuno wished is fulfilled!
you're the best author!

I LOL'ed at the Gilgamesh reference. Aplauded at the Mystic Healer Waifu Fox. And then teared up a bit with the last line :(

Why doesn't this have more reviews?!

OMG, your continuing this?! YES!

You have such a way with words, so flowery, makes you really feel like your seeing and feeling what the characters feel and see. Like there's a real, all to tangible wait in this world.

A few mild typo's, like brought when you meant bought, but that's nothing; the English release of Fate Grand Order has way more, and way worse, typo's then that :D

God I actually teared up a little at the end there...