Nice.

are you going to carry this on? I think it would make an amazing book! :)

This is great! I like Draco's reaction at the end. :)

Oh my ! That was quick. But it is well written, so it is coherent :) Good job !

Lol, quite different from, 'Wait till my father hears of this!' I hope you continue this at least a bit. Is this before Sirius dies, after he found out the prophecy, can Draco help him with Umbrige and the quill?

I feel like it escalated a bit quickly but all in all it was a good fic. Well done! :D

INCREDIBLE

I think you got their characters down pretty well actually. I also love how it ends with Draco wondering what his dad will have to say. Good oneshot.

Sorta quick-paced. But pretty good, so keep writing! ;)