You have to update often, it is by far the best thing I have read from JN in my life! I am Argentine and I am reading your story translating it. It does NOT matter if it costs me a little to do it, it is worth doing it in order to read this wonder. I beg you update !

This is such a fluffy story

Good work! I'm waiting for the next chapter, also I'm worried about Jimmy. Just like an observation, Jimmy's eyes are blue and Cindy's green.

You have a fantastic way of pacing this story. You weave mystery and intrigue, without giving into ploys and cliches. It's the value and integrity of character development that keeps the story moving. That takes a lot of consideration and patience; since it can be hard, as the omniscient presence of your own work, to know where the line between confusion and boring inevitability lies. I greatly appreciate how every chapter is plot driven, avoiding fluff, and a foreshadowing of what mystery is still left. Thank you for what you've written so far and I look forward to what's next!
XOXO PA

Thank you for updating your story.:) This is an awesome and cool chapter.:D It's cool that Cindy has an attraction to Jimmy.:) I'm really excited and curious about the next chapter.:)

Omfg this story is AMAZING YOU ARE LEGIT THE BEST ONLINE AUTHOR IV EVER COME ACROSS. Pleeeeaaseeee update as soon as you can because I know life has been taking you away lately.

Your story is pretty intiristing, I wosh you continue with it. In other hand, is bad tha I feel bad for Betty? Like, if a random girl start acting like she knows more about muy dead ex boyfriend than me, I will be really pissed to. We know the truth, but she no. I wish that Carl and Sheen get more involved. Anyway, good luck with your real life stuff.

Love! Talk about a cliffhanger. Update soon, I can’t wait to read what happens next. Keep up the great story!

update please this is a great story and I need to know how it ends

great story

Thank you for updating your story.:) This is a curious chapter.:)
Since someone has Jimmy’s dna that means they will have access to his lab .: But who wants that access and what will they gain? I’m really curious about the next chapter.:

Plz continue I wanna read more and find out how they gonna get Jimmys DNA

Carl and Sheen each has a bag of Jimmy's hair, if they kept it! This is such a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you for updating your story!_ This is an amazing and wonderful chapter.:) Its cool that Jimmy and Cindy will be going to the lab. The best way they can get dna is hair from a hairbrush and bed.:) I’m excited and curious about the next chapter.:]

I love this story and I’m so glad I found it. Can’t wait for more!