Ok So I know it has been a year or so since you finished this story but I am liking it so far. I like how it picks up where the others leave off. I don't have an issue with the youngins being named after their friends. it does get confusing sometimes. I wish you would celebrate their birthdays so we could keep up with how old they are. In Ch 40 there are a couple of things I am having trouble with. Professor Mcgonagle (SP?) tells him he has to wait for the start of school to be sorted, but then you tell him you are going to show him the Gryffendor (sp?) common room where he will be staying the same day before the sorting. Also, The three are kinda bullying him, like they are too big for their britches now that they have a little brother at the same school with them. Just my take. But again I do love it

So, I have read a lot of HP fanfiction, and not left a review yet. Something about this story, made me want to. H J Potter has been 1 of my favorite stories for a while, and I have read it about a dozen times. This however is a fantastic sequel/ spiritual successor! I love how you took the ideas from the original, tweaked them and made them your own. To those who left reviews after only reading the first chapter and gave up, I really suggest giving it another go. This story was not even close to a rehash of H J Potter, it was so much more! You did some really original things and had some really interesting twists throughout. I know you are writing original works now, but please don't leave the HP universe behind. I really look forward to any future works you bring to the table!

sorry to see only a few people review :( YOURE AMAZING

Hi so I am trying to find the story that’s before this one ... can you please tell me more ... other than H J Potter ... a link would be helpful :)

Owww, so cute...

I'm lost at words here... how come a story over 800k of words has only 27 reviews?

I don't understand. Why so much fixation on bras? Every chapter has a mention of them and every other chapter has bra shopping. This does not seem realistic.

Hello,
Someone left a review that you wrote a sequel to my story so here I am. Your characters are enthralling although I get a little confused between those who share the same name eg. Cedric Diggory and Cedric Potter.
I'm amused and really flattered by this rendition. Have lots of fun :)

Why on Earth would you have them name their children after people who didn't die? I get they were close with Cedric,Daphne, Nev, Luna, etc.. But if those people aren't DEAD there is NO REASON to name the kids that.. Add to it, you're basically repeating the whole storyline from another author's work (yes, based off the original but still repeating).. That's not original. That's not creative. I was excited to read this because I LOVE the original and yet I can't even continue this.

Rubbish!

I do like where you are going with the story. It has been a while since I read H J POTTER so (since I am old and memory is an issue) it takes me a while to connect the dots. Thank you so much for your efforts.

so idk what happened to my original review, but I'll try again. I loved this story 1000%. The only thing I didn't like was I feel like you used the same names too many times. I felt it was unnecessary to make literally 2-3 of every name, ppl can show homage to family they love without completely taking the exact name. It was especially unnecessary in America. but overall I'd still give the story a 10/10.

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I have read many offerings posted on FF about Harry Potter. By far, this perspective has been my most enjoyed! Your choice of subject; how you approached and developed each character and the novel aspects included as to location(s) kept me mesmerized. I will be very happy to continue experiencing any offerings you choose to post and will look forward to your upcoming release in August.

I came across this story less then a week ago. I have to say that this story is really good so far. I can't wait to keep reading this story. Although I may have spent this past week free time reading this story. I feel like it was not wasted lol. I hope you enjoy writing this story as much as I enjoyed reading it so far. Kind of sad to say I read from Chapter 1 to 61 and this then a week. Hope you are doing good and can't wait to read more.

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