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Guest chapter 4 . 9/16
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Xyzdragon1234 chapter 4 . 7/8
Please continue this story
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please update soon loving thus story
look2019 chapter 4 . 2/13
Good Chapter!
NaxCa chapter 4 . 10/16/2019
hi Oblivion overlord,

It has been some time since you last updated this story and I was wondering when you were going to update next. I really like your story and was hoping you would continue
RelentlessIce chapter 4 . 4/15/2019
is this going to get updated any time soon?
Warmachine375 chapter 4 . 4/3/2019
To combat the incoming Drake threat, Natsu would also need God Serena, the Eight Dragons and Hybrid Theory, the 8 elemental Dragon Slayer of the Second Generation, 1st ranked Wizard Saint and Ishgar's strongest Mage. God Serena would be more than happy to fight the Drakes so long it is a stepping stone to become so strong he can fight Acnologia on equal or matching terms and also have mutual discipleship with Natsu on training and mastering their powers together.

Ideas for God Serena's 8 Dragon Slayer Magics:
1. Cavern Dragon Slayer Magic - earth element - canon
2. Purgatory Dragon Slayer Magic - fire element - canon
3. Sea King Dragon Slayer Magic - water element - canon
4. Gale Dragon Slayer Magic - wind element - canon
5. Storm Dragon Slayer Magic - lightning element - idea
6. Blizzard Dragon Slayer Magic - ice element - idea
7. Molten Dragon Slayer Magic - lava element - idea
8. Adamantine Dragon Slayer Magic - metal element - idea

Ideas to complete the Ten Wizard Saint roster.
1. God Serena - 1st ranked
2. Draculos Hyberion - 2nd ranked
3. Wolfheim - 3rd ranked
4. Warrod - FT founder - 4th ranked
5. Jura Neekis - Lamia Scale Ace - 5th ranked
6. Natsu Dragneel - 4th FT Guild Master - 6th ranked
7. Golden Eyes Brosnan - Holy Knight Captain of the Fiore Royal Guard - user of Golden Eyes - 7th ranked
8. Venomous War Dog Cruzer - Guild Ace of Quartro Cerberus - user of Poison God Slayer Magic - 8th ranked
9. Sea Bride Stella - Guild Master of Mermaid Heel - user of Brine Magic that utilizes seawater - 9th ranked
10. Tyson Hammer - Chief Marshal of the Custody Enforcement Unit - user of Burst Magic, an energy-type Magic - 10th ranked

As for Hyberion's Vampire Magic, the idea would be that his vampiric like abilities would be like that of Castlevania's Dracula or Hellsing Ultimate's Alucard or even Warhammer Fantasy's Vlad von Carstein or Abhorash. Vampire Magic needed more fleshing out to be more than just one scene of Hyberion choking God Serena before he unleashed his Dragon Slayer Magic for the first time in the canon.

And for Wolfheim's abilities would be advanced tier Beast Soul that puts Elfman's own to shame or even Mirajane too as well and his ultimate transformation would be Megido of Lava, a massive humanoid lion that controls extremely powerful flames and lava at command, and possessed inhumanly immense strength to give even Dragons a run for their money from Rave Master as a reference.

Hope you like the ideas. :)

Please make the Rune Knights as strong as they're supposed to be and give them justice for the huge disservice that Hiro Mashima had portrayed them as weak, incompetent, and virtually useless as cannon fodder and cartoony guards.

I have this idea of mine for the ranking system of the Rune Knights for the Adaptational Badass dose big time on them from the bottom to the top of the chain of command if you're interested of course for this story:
1. Cadet
2. Regular
3. Lieutenant
4. Captain
5. Major
6. Field Commander
7. Colonel
8. Division Commander
9. Major General
10. Lieutenant General
11. General
12. Minister General
13. Grand General
14. Supreme Commander

What do you think in your thoughts and opinions about the Rune Knight ranking than just being Captain like Lahar being Captain of the 4th Custody Enforcement Unit for example?

To describe about these Rune Knight rankings:
1. The Supreme Commander is the highest rank within the entirety of Ishgar's Rune Knights, who commands all the Rune Knights in the continent and possesses the strength on par with that of Fiore's highest ranked Wizard Saint and Ishgar's strongest Mage but is subservient to the Chairman of the Magic Council.

2. The Grand General is the leader of a country's Rune Knights and is on a level of a 5th Wizard Saint. Supported by four Generals who are direct subordinates to him/her when it comes to leading their forces in battle. Is also considered to be second-in-command of the Supreme Commander who takes charge by himself/herself after arriving from Pergrande Kingdom, the largest and most powerful country of Ishgar.

3. The Generals are the top ranking officers of the Rune Knights and the chosen 4 who answer to the Grand General and the Supreme Commander too as well and are as strong as a Wizard Saint. Sometimes they take in apprentices who are Lieutenant Generals whose respective level of power are that of Guild Aces in grooming and training them as their potential successors in the future.

4. The Major Generals are the direct subordinates of the Lieutenant Generals and are somewhat considered the middle-men of the Rune Knight chain of command and they are considered to be on an S-Class level.

5. The Minister General is the one who usually takes care of the internal and external affairs of the Rune Knights, usually involves politics and public relations that does not require a lot of power in such rank while the Generals lead the fighting, yet is stronger than the current four Generals. Usually reserved for veteran Rune Knights or former Councilors with military background.

6. As for the rest of the other ranks: Division Commander, Colonel and Field Commander, they control the divisions and battalions as they personally lead them in the front lines and are on the mid-tier class of power compared with seasoned Guild Mages.

7. And the Major, Captain, and Lieutenant, they command the squadrons and teams of Regulars and Cadets who are the weakest of the Rune Knights all like scrubs they are and needed more training, and three high ranks in the lower chain of command of them have a moderately strong level in their own right compared to experienced Guild Mages.

On the bright side, some of the high-ranking Rune Knights can be allowed to customize their officer's uniforms with their own fashion preferences along with their own custom weaponry and equipment that stands them out from the lower ranks in the chain of command (whose canon Rune Knight rank and file uniform with staves looks so boring and uninspiring, and needs to be replaced with replacement of something more practical yet formal and militaristic uniform and equipped with actual standard weaponry but the staves can stay though) and be recognized and distinguished so long they follow strict uniform code and protocol including the addition of the Council colors and ankh emblem in their uniform; be it blue and white; and black and white.

The canon Rune Knight officer's uniform worn by Lahar and Doranbolt, and the other Rune Knight officer's uniform worn by Gajeel, Levy, and Pantherlily during their time at the Wizard Saint-run Council for one year are still cool and can stay as standard uniforms for the Rune Knight officers in the Council military with some little modifications and additions into them if they wanted to.

Remember the MPF event of the Grand Magic Games arc and Lahar, who was a guest commentator, stated that Millianna's MPF level is high enough to get a position of Captain in the Rune Knights after she struck the Magic Power Finder device as first contender.

So I got this in accordance to their MPF rankings if these people were in the Rune Knights:
1. Millianna: 365 - Captain
2. Nobarly: 124 - Lieutenant
3. Hibiki: 95 - Regular
4. Obra: 4 - Barely even qualified as a Cadet
5. Orga: 3,825 - Field Commander
6. Jura: 8,544 - Lieutenant General
7. Cana: 9,999 - General (even though she did it through Mavis lending her Fairy Glitter just to get a cheap ass win the event)

In this chart, these are the MPF Levels for the Rune Knight rankings:
10 - 50: Cadet
51 - 100: Regular
101 - 350: Lieutenant
351 - 1,000: Captain
1,001 - 3,000: Major
3,001 - 4,000: Field Commander
4,001 - 5,000: Colonel
5,001 - 6,000: Division Commander
6,001 - 7,000: Major General
7,001 - 9,000: Lieutenant General
9,001 - 12,000: General
18,000: Minister General
24,000: Grand General
30,000: Supreme Commander

What do you think of the MPF levels in your thoughts and opinion?

I have a feeling Kain would not see that coming considering he doesn't really know much about the Fairy Tail world since he might have been busy studying the laws, the history and the ins-and-outs of the Council to further improve his lawyer skills and knowledge for the Guild and it is even way deeper than he thought but even he would be aware that the canon Rune Knights were so weak and useless to the point of just there to take away the apprehended Dark Mages and criminals into custody after Team Valiant defeated them.

Heck you could even give a expanded lore for the Rune Knights and their history and purpose as guardians of the World of Magic and military police organization of the Magic Council in their founding with their duties of patrolling and protecting the continent from threats, enforce the Council's laws and ideals, and dispense justice on criminals and lawbreakers they battled and apprehended. That'd be so awesome!

After all, I always wanted to see Lahar in real action with actual Magic and combat skills he displays instead of just standing there and commanding the troops in the canon. Heck, even Doranbolt can kick serious butt as a Rune Knight in canon.

Having Fiore have a country-wide military force of Rune Knights with enormous magical ability that can keep evildoers in check alongside the Magic Council's vast weaponry would certainly explain why they (Tartaros) hesitated from open conflict for so long (The seven year time-skip). To operate from the shadows and find the perfect opportunity in order to eliminate the Magic Council alongside the military Hierarchy, Fiore's military and magical forces would be paralyzed as their government has been effectively neutralized. The civilian government (the king and such) won't be able to do much at all in the chaos and confusion because of the lack of leadership for all the separate branches of government which is what Tartaros desired. A perfect opportunity in order to activate Face. Fairy Tail is just one of the many guilds in the country and thus not the main line of defense from country-wide threats such Tartaros. The magical bomb that Seilah had Elfman plant was just a bonus in the plan to eliminate Fiore's strongest guild in the aftermath of the Grand Magic Games.

To add onto that, it would also aid in the 'power of government' that one got a distinct feeling from the beginning of Mashima's story. They're not cannon fodder but an actual power to be feared. The Rune Knights: Fiore's civilian and magical military alongside the Magic Council. Light and Dark Guilds have a reason to be afraid of their attention and respect their authority because of the power they wield.

Anyways this is a really good story and I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Faved and Followed. :)
arata7kasuga chapter 4 . 3/15/2019
Natsu should not be against brawls and fights .-. It isn't like Wendy or Cero were even close to death or anything. Also him getting upset over the damage is kinda off putting. I would have thought he would have been a guild master that encouraged brawling and would have ignored damage that can just be repaired. I thought he woulda been a cool master to have xD Zancrow should be interesting. Also, why is Natsu so against teaching? Based on his character, he should have no issue whatsoever in helping other people get strong as they can. That is kind of his entire character 'helping his friends' yeah? On that note, why isn't he like training Wendy since she is affected by the Drakes and the possible return of the Dragons? Shouldn't he want her able to defend herself?
arata7kasuga chapter 3 . 3/15/2019
Haha, I didn't read the very last line of last chapter. Whooopos, my bad! Uhh, your A/N sounded very agitated and aggressive .-. Blackmail? I like it! Why eye scars though? If it was so hard to pull off, why not just do something like scars across his chest or something? xD
arata7kasuga chapter 2 . 3/15/2019
Natsu can fly! Wooooo! Hmm, why have Wendy go into the time spell though?
arata7kasuga chapter 1 . 3/14/2019
Uh, if it is magma it should be perfectly fine to eat. Just like a water dragon should be able to eat snow or ice. .-.
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