That was a really deep and sweet fanfic!

This is supremely, utterly sweet. I absolutely love it, and it's now on my favorite's list! My only complaints are that it would have been better if it had ended on Bowser and Jr. again instead of thoughts of Mario and the others, and that the past perfect tense and constant use of pronouns can make it easy to get lost in a few places (especially the sentence that started with 'Your son was on the verge of being too spoiled') but this story still hit me right in the heart. I love it, and to any would-be readers who are looking at this review you can take that as my highest recommendation.

I've actually never thought about Bowser and Jr's relationship like this
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I regret this fact, as such, this is marvelously written

Usually I'm scandalised by second-person stories, since they are never the most...innocent... but this was lighthearted and fun! I liked it a lot!

*searches for article on unanswered mario questions*

Cool story! I like it! I don't get to read second person that often.