Reviews for The First Death |
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Eldiatric C chapter 11 . 7/4/2009 I love your story! I like how Muraki sees the world and the people close to him. It made for a very excellent read! Thank you! |
Serene Ice Dragon chapter 11 . 5/3/2009 Wow. This story was amazing. I spent all weekend reading instead of studying for exams lol. The writing was amazing. Hisoka's parts were probably my favorite, I love how you wrote from his perspective. The parts with Terazuma and Wakaba were adorable. I thoroughly enjoyed every minute reading this! |
Catie chapter 3 . 3/5/2008 Wow, what a perfect ending for this chapter. I just want to live in it. |
Lady Psychic chapter 11 . 2/26/2007 This was an awesome story. It was well written and had an awesome plot. I've been reading this fic all night and I couldn't stop reading until the end. |
ai-08 chapter 11 . 3/14/2006 my ass is sore from sitting this long, but it was more than worth it. this was such an amazing story. *tears of happiness* and it has the best pairings ever! we really need more TerazumaWakaba goodness around here... This was a great read! |
ShiniJekka chapter 11 . 2/16/2006 I get to be your 100th review, cos I'm your biggest fan. Ha-haa. Love you sweetie. I've been downloading your fics to keep me entertained after the internet room shuts down. I miss you! |
Double chapter 2 . 2/14/2006 Very good use of language. quite poetic. there are especially a few sentences that i like. the plot is good, despite a little confusing at this point, but i like your pairings. somehow i've taken a strange liking to Oriya. anyway, Ganbatte ne! |
Deep Color chapter 11 . 2/7/2006 Yay! The epilogue, finally. Meant to read it earlier, but was robbed of time. I like this. This is a nice way to wrap up the story. It starts out very light, and for a while I thought it was gonna stay like that until the end. You know, to balance out the heavy story in the former chapters, I suppose? But, hmm.. how do I put it? It's like a... line graph. one that goes up and down and then back again. That's how it felt, reading this. Quite frankly, I don't understand what the first half of this epilogue had to do with the last half, but at least there was a good story to more than cover it up. Everything was pretty easy to read, nothing too submerging, except for, well, Tatsumi's parts. Speaking of which, I wonder, though, why Tatasumi isn't written in first POV. And yes, never in my entire 24-hour-day-dream-life have I thought of an uke Tatsumi! I always thought him the epitome of being seme. You proved me wrong. And I liked the character of Sato. It fits very well. :) Doesn't this bit make you want to write a side-story of them Muraki? *hinthint* Okay, moving on... Very consistent with verb tenses. Just had to mention that, really, coz I sometimes miss out on this myself. One minute, I'm writing in present-perfect tense, the next, I'm doing past. If you know what I mean, it can be very frustrating in the aftermath. I enjoyed reading the sidestory and the Payback portion. Really, I was wondering when Terazuma would get to that. ;) Overall, you've done a bad job at wrapping the story up: IT STILL BEGS FOR A SEQUEL! Boy, do I sound like a fangirl or what? And, yeah, a belated gong xi fa cai to a brilliant writer. Woof woof! |
Lunetta Suzie Jewel chapter 11 . 2/5/2006 This is, without doubt, the most excellent story I have ever read. Not fanfiction, I mean STORY, including stuff in the real world. I am putting this on my Fave's list and never taking it off, and if you wouldn't mind, when I have my fansite up and running, I want to link to it on the Yami no Matsuei Literature page. Thank you for this amazing story. |
Literary Eagle chapter 11 . 1/27/2006 Tomu-Serubou? Is that a Tom Servo reference? _ Anyway, congratulations on completing this wonderful story! I really enjoyed your beautiful writing, excellent characterization, and charming humor. Great job! |
alescA Munroe chapter 11 . 1/27/2006 _ It's even better than I expected. Write more soon. |
alesca-chan chapter 10 . 2/17/2005 sugoi! i read this on a different site and liked it i'm glad i got to review it, it's such a wonderful fic you should write more oriya/tatsumi i like your style |
Ayumie chapter 10 . 12/12/2004 Well lady, that was quite a read! Thank you so much for pointing me this way. Actually it has been quite a while since I read anything rated below R, because lets face it, Im just that shallow, but you kept me interested throughout the whole thing. I dont even feel like I desperately need for the manga to continue because it is all here, neatly wrapped up with perfect characterizations and all the explanations I could wish for. It suddenly all makes sense! It felt like reading a novel version of the manga. So again, thank you again and I promise Ill translate as fast as I can _- |
Under the Oak Tree chapter 10 . 11/20/2004 A poignant story, with a poignant ending and liberally sprinkled with light, wry touches of humor. Lovely work. Will we get to see the epilogue anytime soon? |
journace chapter 10 . 11/3/2004 Found this fic through a recommendation on another website. Terazuma and Wakaba. *big smile* Those guys never get enough screentime. And you managed to fit everyone in. I'm too lost for words to give a proper review but I do know one thing. Really love this. The omakes are nice too. |