hey, just thought you should know, theres a sentence near the top where you put a period instead of a comma "part, if not most, of that..." its teeny tiny and i wouldnt have pointed it out if you hadnt asked about it.

Amazing! I do agree a sequel focusing on Sabriel would be funny. You're awesome!

You're only human!? I thought you were an angel...? Hahaha nice and cute one shot!