You have to make more plz plz plz

I love it

Hello, you are a great author and I would like you or others to write it. Would you or someone else write a story in which max will try to get into the astral dimension and will it ? Then the family could worry about him and question him one by one why. It's not good when someone is addicted to it ... I know I'm weird, but the friend talks about it

Is this complete? You should put a complete mark on it.

Thank you for relationship between Hank and Max

This is so good please update soon

Awesome!
You will also make Hank and Max? When Max gets cried in the bathroom, Hank comes to help him.
I miss a lot of their relationship in the series.
PLEASE!

I knew it! I knew this was going to be a tragic story :( The way you wrote about Max being so worried about his twin sister was just flawless, I'm sure that's exactly how he would react if this happened in the show. It's so sad how he tried to wake her up with no success, and she couldn't do anything about it.

I like the way you're trying to make Phoebe understand that they should work as a team, but it doesn't mean one of them is going to be a sidekick. Partners in crime should be equals. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow you totally surpried me with this two chapters. I wasn't expecting to have Chloe showing Phoebe how much she needs Max too, because let's face it, she loves to brag as much as he does, but she can be proud sometimes. This reminded me of "A Christmas Carol" it's a great idea!

This is so good! I recently watched "May the Z Force be with you" and taking that specific line it's a great idea to start this fic because it's true he need Phoebe more than he's willing to admit. Now I'm worried about Pheebs because I'm almost sure this is going to be a really tragic story. I'm reading the next chapters right now!