Reviews for The Golden Stag
rikoonee chapter 31 . 8/5
I can't express how much I love this story with words. Such a fantastic fic. The fact that you made Damon a human who continues to grow, instead of Mr. Gary Stu is so refreshing. Thank you for writing this!
rikoonee chapter 21 . 8/4
This chapter is sooo good. I actually hope that Damon won't marry Margaery, because he had a such a reaction to her and he could be controlled. Might be better another girl, they will respect each othee but hold no sway over each other.
LordStark5 chapter 10 . 7/21
Like I mentioned in my last review, there is no way that they would’ve escaped and avoided the Battle of the Camps. Damon should be a prisoner along with his uncle.
LordStark5 chapter 9 . 7/21
From what I gather later in the chapter, it seems like this is headed towards averting the Battle of the Camps. The issue is that first, Robb and his men are all mounted, while the remaining host of Westermen that numbers about 13k at this point is comprised almost entirely of infantry (12k infantry, 1k free riders who went over the the Starks). Second, we have no reason to assume that they didn’t hear what was happening at the Battle of the Whispering Wood, or that some survivors made it back to warn them ahead of time. Third, they’ve settled in for a siege and so at this point, and would never be able to uproot everything before Robb and his army descends on them. The smarter move is to be prepared for battle since otherwise they’ll waste their time and not be ready.
Also while this is something that took place a little while back, you mentioned that you aged characters up, including Myrcella to the age of 12. Robert would almost certainly would’ve arranged a betrothal between her and Robb if that had been the case since he was interested in joining their houses both ways, and the match he arranged in the original timeline was between a 12 year old Joffrey and an 11 year old Sansa. I can’t see the tags on this since I’m reading this on my phone, but if they aren’t a thing in this, I would recommend you edit it to make Myrcella younger like 9 or 10 if you really needed her to be aged up (or go back to her original age of 8).
Newland Archer chapter 31 . 7/12
Great story. Loved the different plot points and perspectives we see in this story. I'm so glad you decide to avoid rehashing cannon events. I've read far too many fics where the dialog is almost identical to cannon with but a few words here and there changed.
Love the twist at the end. I look forward to seeing more.
Madara01011 chapter 31 . 7/6
Ok, the MC got better from before, I'll keep an eye on this and we'll see how the story develops.
Madara01011 chapter 16 . 7/6
I find myself disgusted by the autistic fucker that's the main character. probably dropping this soon.
Feanor-dutch chapter 31 . 4/29
As Always great work
UltimateGohanssj10 chapter 16 . 4/19
damon is very much similar to stannis isnt he? He isnt that good with people, has a sense of honor and duty and is or rather will be the lord of dragon stone. Though, he is rether fond of prostitutes (whores)...but thats not important... Right?
silverrain-shiningsun chapter 21 . 4/8
I am really enjoying this story. I relate to Damon very much.
silverrain-shiningsun chapter 7 . 4/7
Okay, I’m pretty sure Damon has autism 1/Asperger’s. . I can relate to just about everything he says.
Guest chapter 31 . 4/3
Great Story! One of my favorites even though the Kraken business doesn’t interest me particularly (I don’t think the Greyjoy’s are very interesting), I’m very interested to see how the marge/oc thing turns out . But the reason your story is something special, is that all other fanfic I find are all about Roberts Trueborn which with time gets very boring. So I’d love to see more interaction with Tywin, Jamie etc etc.
Keep up the good work!
Leo
FreeJSJJ chapter 31 . 3/31
Thanks for the chapter!
Stay Safe!
Tighearna na gealaich chapter 31 . 3/29
I have never had the pleasure of reading the original material, however I thoroughly enjoyed the TV series. This fic has left me craving more with every chapter you write. The characterisation and pacing makes for a truly enjoyable read. There are certain storylines that I find myself wondering what is happening, however most of those are storyline I remember from the show and (currently?) have no real baring on what is happening in regards to your story. I cannot wait to see what happens next! Thank you for the work you put in and I hope you and yours are safe during this trying time.
Dipsyy chapter 31 . 3/19
This shit is getting hype I’m excited
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