Reviews for The Spartan Mutant |
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![]() ![]() ![]() go read a movie script and a novel, then tell the difference between them |
![]() ![]() Using Toad's tongue made this disgusting please don't use that again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is more of a Screenplay than a anything else. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So when exactly is X-23 going to appear? |
![]() ![]() "You never fucking learn." Sean said before he reattached his head. "Fuck you." Reznov said. "Your not going to be cursing like this when the baby is here are you?" Wanda asked. "Hell no. I might curse a lot in front of you guys but thats difference compared to a baby." Sean said. No it's not different at all. |
![]() ![]() Please don't add Mystique to Sean's harem besides the fact that I don't like her there is also way too much bad blood between them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHA! I love the head on a plate scene! With two babies on the way and with Mystique, now in hold of information of the institute, who knows what kind of trouble the x-men are going to face? I'm definitely waiting impatiently for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! A baby is on the way! All the more reason for Sean to get even more stronger to protect his soon to be born child from the mystery killer mutant |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're actually the first fanfiction Author I know to do that. Any chance Sean from Rider of the League could crossover to your Family guy story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear. It seems the mysterious killer mutant wasn't the only person trying to meddle with Sean's power. I only hope Sean will be able to handle the truth in time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me Black Panther's daughter will be in the harem! And she hulk! God I love she-hulk from Hulk and the Agents of S.M.A.S.H |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it just me? Or is Ororo a sexy name for Storm? With Starfire joining the institute, I got a feeling Raven won't be far behind. I'd like to see mystic pull one over her lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() While I've never watched the X men cartoon series, I could hazard a guess there's more to the whole show then just Magneto vs. X-men. Still though, the mutant who attack Sean and his family seems to believe he can control Sean's life though manipulating his destiny into whatever he wishes...I smell 'puppeteer' with him. Hopefully Sean will one day be able to stand up to him and bring him down to sweet and painful justice. The plot thickens and the harem grows! Can wait to see who gets pregnant first. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let's be honest: ANYONE would be sore at someone for taking their ride for a spin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter, keep up the good work |