This is such an amazing story with a lot of potential, I hope you don't stress out to much about it and just have fun with it. Remember this is YOUR story.

Nice to see this story is still alive and kicking!

Seems like Robin evaded a lot of headaches

Do you mean, "Robin this is a great service..."? I think since you rushed on this or something it turned out wrong. Otherwise this was interesting to see their reactions. Lissa is a bit selfish saying she wanted to prank him more than saying something about a better reason fir him to stay. Then again she has been rather selfish compared to Chrom and Emmeryn.

I bet the Shepards are NOT going to react well to this. Lets see how long Robin will last. Hopefully he can also rule Plegia with the same principles as Emmeryn.

I hope it will continue, I thought it was doing okay so far. It would be nice to see some more progress on this story when you have the time.

Amnesia's a bitch isn't it.

It's a good deal... In a way. Probably not acceptable to Chrom and co though.

Awww this was getting good. Hope that you will continue to write this story. I will wait patiently for your return.

Nice idea but you REALLY need to work on your sentence structuring, grammar and all.
Commas and breaks in sentences is much appreciated so readers can read easily.

I hope that whatever your situation is it improves for you.

Oh man, I smell shenanigans!

Please continue with the story. Im rather curious to see how things play out.

Really liking the story so far, looks like shenanigans are in store for a certain tactician!

The dialogue and plot are flowing well so far, the only constructive criticisim I feel I need to offer (so sorry if I sound like an ass) is in the structuring of the text.
Having so much of the character dialogue broken up as it is has the effect of making the interaction feel a bit stilted, don't be afraid to use paragraphs when writing conversations to help with the natural flow of a scene.
Also, a slightly more liberal use of adjectives when describing the manner and tones in which characters are speaking really helps paint the scene you'r trying to convey and will help increase reader immersion.

Again, I'm so sorry if any of that sounded preachy and I really do hope you continue this fic, its been great so far and I look forward to reading more.

That is rather intressing becuse in the games as well in many fanfictions many of the characters
dont seems to care or have a riaction forward Robins Cloths that screams Plegia orgin that really botherd me during the games progress. I mean Fredrick is the only one who act hostile forward Robin in the proluge chapter and as far i know is only him and no one else.

"I noticed it to same hair, same eye color, gods he even had the same name oddly enough." Henry said.
"But Tharja you NEED to realize it's not him." Henry said.
Tharja said nothing she only stared away from her childhood friend.
"You need to move on he's not coming back." Henry said.
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Now I'm curious... Did they know each other once? Or is it a different person?