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So Dumbledore and some of his followers are now in custody in france interesting. Hermione is pregnant and is scared it could be twins like Luna foretold her Severus tries to soothe it but is a bit worried himself how that will turn out. *cupcakes for inspiration and the great work*

Great chapter.

fun to read :) thank you for sharing

I love your story! Yes, there were a few grammatical errors. That's why a person should never proof read their own papers- your brain sees what you mean to say not what you actually wrote. When I did my post graduate papers ( shortest one was 45 pages) I always had some one proof it, didn't matter that they knew nothing about medicine, just that my sentence structure was top notch.

Long winded constructive help there I hope. Please do keep writing! I look forward to more :)

The story was brilliant! There are quite a few grammatical errors (mostly of the kind: their-there; your-you're, etc) and mistakes suggesting you were rewriting a sentence, but the plot was great :) There were a few occasions that I had small problems following the story, but it might be because of my state of exhausted mind and not your writing :P
Thank you for your lovely story!

Wonderful story I loved this powerful heroine!

I fucking loved this story.
I am so glad I came across it. Thank you so much

So it isn't really over for them and they still aren't safe from some people. Very good and interesting chapter. *cookies for inspiration and the good work*

interesting to read as always.

This extra chapter was good.

Well done and an interesting take on the time turner story.

I absolutely adore your story! Thanks for giving me a happy place to after the struggles of daily life. Your story really brightened my days.

I admit it took me a bit to get into it, mostly because I read time Turner, a dark man and a Slytherin family, and expected back in time like Marauders Era time travel so that's what I went in expecting and not getting lol. I absolutely loved this story. It is nothing like what I've read before and it kept throwing out twists that just made me go WHAT! lol I did not expect the extent of her loosing what she lost and I actually cried for Snape and Pucey in that chapter. Got a little scared she was going to stay heartless. Glad she didn't. I kinda wish the Dumbledork retaliation thing got tied up, kinda left me expecting it, and it just never came, we don't know what happened to him besides him retiring to keep his honor. But it's still a great story. Thank you for not abandoning it, even if I just found it lol.

I am quite fond of Hermione's characterization: strong yet with some vulnerabilities. There is no clear resolution on Dumbledore in the it deleiberate? Or maybe a setup for sequel?