Wow. What a fic. I loved pretty much all of it. Including the time jump, with Archie away. The whole development of the core 4 reads beautifully, plus I love how you introduced elements from the comics as well. Another great thing is the jokes and comments about teen culture. You do have some semantic problems, a beta would help a lor I think. In any case please keep writting, you clearly have a knack for it!

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my favorite story. keep it up

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i really like this story

I'm loving the progression of this story. And I'm also loving cute/fluffy/smutty barchie moments and I'm hoping for many more. Please update soon! x

THAT REUNION WAS PERFECT! MY HEART! SUCH A BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I NEED MORE BARCHIE!

Oh my god! Loved it! Please update! And please make Archie & Betty reunit! I need them to see eachother!

Love. Love. Love it! I've missed this story so much! I remember reading it when it first came out and everytime you've updated since then. Can't wait for whats next, hopefully Archie comes back surprises Betty or something. I'm in desperate need of some Barchie! xxx

I just want to say you have got a great fic here, the storytelling is top notch and the dialogue keeps getting better and better with each chapter. I can totally understand your frustration with the show, I share a similar concern as I wrote in an earlier chapter, but that's more the reason why you should continue. To offer an alternative into the world of Riverdale, that doesn't make your slice your wrists ;) In any case great work, thanks for sharing it and please do continue.

Awesome chapter. Love your dialogue, it's as entertaining as it is believable. The Archie mystery is quite promising as well. I just wanted to mention that I agree with you, the show could use less murder mystery and more character development. Plus the tone is at times way too dark and disturbing. In any case great chapter, thanks for sharing it and please continue.