Reviews for Revival of the Uzumaki Clan
Guest chapter 16 . 6/23
Do not like the pairing just No
Guest chapter 20 . 6/20
I hope you update this one day!
aGnamZer0 chapter 20 . 5/23
Can I hope for a new chapter or is this story dropped ? It was really an interesting take on the time travel trope. Good job !
aGnamZer0 chapter 19 . 5/23
Ahah ! How quickly take care of two immortals. XD
aGnamZer0 chapter 17 . 5/23
Good job in attacking Obito psychologically like that. It seems we're goint to soon see Karin. And me who wondered when sh'd appear, since you know she's an Uzumaki.
aGnamZer0 chapter 15 . 5/23
I'm really happy I continued after chapter 11. It actually became even better than before. I absolutely like it. Thanks for writing that. And sorry for having judged it too fast the first time I read it.
aGnamZer0 chapter 13 . 5/23
It was a really fascinating infiltration. Shadow Clone and Henge's definitely the best for this kind of mission, and Naruto is an expert of both techniques. 'twas fun to read.
aGnamZer0 chapter 12 . 5/23
I didn't expect the budding love between Honoka and Kakashi. Interesting... And it seems the Naruto of this time got himself a better teacher than the one of the original timeline.
aGnamZer0 chapter 11 . 5/23
So yeah, I'm pretty sure that was the last chapter I read, but this time genuinely curious about the next. How will Kakashi deal with his sensei's son, son that he basically abandoned because of his trauma. Will he be a true sensei, or will he be like in canon, not teaching him anything worthwile ? Seems pretty interesting to me.
aGnamZer0 chapter 9 . 5/23
Well, now I know why I had stopped around here the first time. I can accept a non-jinchuuriki Naruto. I can accept a Kyuubi jinchuuriki Naruto. I can accept a Nine Bijuu Jinchuuriki Naruto. I can accept a Juubi jinchuuriki Naruto. But a Sanbi jinchuuriki Naruto ? That is more difficult to accept.

And then I most likely have checked the title of the future chapters—which led me to think I most likely have read the fic 'till chapter 11—and discovered that it will be centered around Kiri and their precious swords. And so, his relationship with the ninja of Konoha—read Shisui—won't really have the time to improve before the last released chapter. And so, I just stopped here.

Well, this time I do intend to go until the end, but I wanted to give you the reason of why I probably dropped the first time, since I mentioned it in an earlier comment.

That being said, you have a very original approach to your fic, and while I will admit it's not one that pleases me much, it's still very entertaining because of its unpredictibility. And I'm interested to what kind of rapport he will enjoy with Isobu.
aGnamZer0 chapter 4 . 5/22
Ah, finally the meeting between Shisui and Raiden. It would be great if he'd become his mate. I saw that kakashi was also put in the main characters, but I'm not a big fan of NaruKaka.

It's also great to see that Naruto quickly warmed up to Raiden, though it's strange Sarutobi allowed Raiden so close to the Jinchuuriki without suspicion, even if he's an Uzumaki—thing he didn't even prove.
aGnamZer0 chapter 2 . 5/22
I started re-reading this fic and I find the comments I wrote a year ago didn't make honor to this fic. Honestly, I don't remember if I went to the end or if I stopped somewhere. I don't remember either why I only commented up to chapter 5. But I know I didn't say everything I should have.

For example, I had commented in chapter 1 about the absurdity of Naruto not accessing Senjutsu because he lost the Toad contract. But here, when he finally managed because he only needed some adaptation time, I didn't corrected myself. So here I do. Plus, maybe he will finally stop having those ridiculous marks and eyes. Anyway, I want to tell you that this time, I find your fic incredible.
spell checker 11111 chapter 20 . 4/4
Im not sure why this story isnt more popular, ive seen worse stories with thousands of reviews. Anyway this is great, youre an excellent writer and you have a clearly defined plot and character base. Iknow you havent updated in a while but itd be great if you finished this story, there arent many like it.
Professor Fluff chapter 2 . 3/29
you should work on your portrayal of characters so they sound and act more like themselves. thats just my two cents
Le055Li0n chapter 20 . 1/3
Really hope you continue this as it's really well written and enjoyable
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