Really good story! But u kinda killed it a little when ili basically left out nautilus and we didn’t even get to see his noble phantasom! I mean really! Pls update

I specifically only reviewed here after seeing the review below me.

Whoever it is below me is either incredibly moronic, doesn't understand English, or is a jester.

Judging by their words to Shirou, who they say is a 'failed' character, they're definitely dull.
The fandom of type-moon has many wonderful characters but sadly there are too many people in the fandom like the guy/gal below me who think Shirou is a failed character.

These people are the ones who ruin the fandom.

When people say 'typical Shirou wank' or 'typical EMIYA wank' instead of anything else, they're usually either too dumb to understand what those phrases ACTUALLY refer to, or are just incapable of grasping the fandom.

A third option, the worst of all, would be that they joined the hate bandwagon for no reason other than bandwagon.

Let me get this through to those people too stupid to understand.

Shirou Wank and EMIYA wank refer to Shirou and Emiya doing shit FAR too powerful than they can do.

Such as summoning Excalibur without ANY reason.

What isn't wanking when summoning Excalibur is if
A. Shirou is infused with the grail.
B. Shirou is infused with a god.
C. Arturia Class Card EMIYA Class Card
D. Alaya Contract Fate Route Understanding of Arturia on a deeper level
E. Understanding of Excalibur through blueprint uploaded to UBW via the Root
F. Reaching the Root

And I do not regret to inform the idiot below that there is a reason why Sans is loved and hated and the ignorance you have is one major reason Sans is hated.

Shirou, is essentially the Undertale Sans equivalent to Type-Moon.

And I don't think people understand why Shirou is powerful here.
Let me give you a quote from Archer.

"If you can't beat your opponent, imagine something that can."

Archer is a Shirou Emiya turned into a Counter Guardian. He, as a servant, is still powerful enough to shave off 5-7 of Heracles' lives.

Heracles is a demigod, heroic spirit, servant, and someone in Type Moon capable of demolishing Naruto in a 1v1 with EASE.

Thinking otherwise is wanking Naruto.

After all, Naruto can't survive C-Rank Noble Phantasms and Naruto doesn't have anything other than a Truth Seeking ball or whatever which will really only delay the inevitable.

That thing might attempt to absorb Heracles, but what is the point of absorbing something when you're already dead?

EMIYA is also a direct counter to Gilgamesh with UBW on. Gilgamesh, a man who can practically one shot anyone in Naruto. Naruto himself would get one shotted from Ea. Granted, Gilgamesh would win in a fight against EMIYA if EMIYA wasn't taken seriously but Gilgamesh took EMIYA seriously and attempted to kill him.

Shirou Emiya, from any route except Fate, while no where near any servants in terms of power, is still vastly superior to anyone less than a servant in power due to the sheer versatility and his noble phantasms that he forged in UBW.

Seriously, stop being an idiot.

Why am I not surpirsed this story took a nosedive and died the very chapter you decided that Shirou needed to be the/a main character? Shirou is an esterely overblown character with a massive impact on any stiry tat an author choos to make him more than a simple side plot. Mainly due to the obsession and idolisation his rabid fans have given him over the years. That he imediately tookover the atory, and had drama after drama, as well as gaining allies ans power all in a sigle chapter the momwnt you decided he needed his won, all right before you decided to stop writing... well its little real surpise then the story goes from a rare as hell Ilya fic to just another Shirou one that you lost interest in it is there? Because at the end of the day, Shirou is a boring and failed character, and eveything that can be done with him, has been done with him at this point. I’m actually really disppointed to see he story end, or even continue if it were to continue, in this way. Still, I would recommend adding Shirou to the tags too, that way all his fanboys can join tou and readrs oike me who are not interested dont get suckered in. All the better for everyone. Whether you choose to continue or not. Still a disappointing as hell ending/ chapter though. Just more Shirou fanwank.

I honestly thought it would be Yasuo that's going to appear instead of Ahri considering the sword. But then again, it's the charm by Nautillus.

almost reaching a year

Excellent story, looking forward to reading more!

Hello. First of all i want to say i love your work; its amazing seriusly. But i want you to be completely honest with me: is this abandoned?
Please answer me, i need to know i cant spleep at night because of this. Please say something. I will accept it if you actually abandoned it, but say ANYTHING. Also more nautilus pls :p.
PS: i didnt saw your other works, so if you explain something there i dont have any idea right now

Holy. Shit.

This was badass!

Thought this was a Nautilus fanfic not a Ahri harem fanfic.

This chapter is forcing a lot of things, dropped

Glad to see this return, hope it does again. Keep up the great work, though maybe do some proof reading, a few spelling and grammar mistakes through out distract from an excellent plot

THe moment I saw Nautilus' name being a part of this fic... well, I immediately clicked on it!

This is pretty cool!

I was pleasantly surprised at how fun this doc was to read! Please continue the hard work!

It's doesn't matter how long I have to wait if this is the quality and quantity I get! It's soo good! I can wait. See ya! o/