Reviews for Never again!
a1d4k7 chapter 7 . 8/30
"Human can't be pirate king"? Arlong was arrogant, but he wasn't stupid enough to not realize that Gol D Roger was human.
link10213055 chapter 12 . 8/30
Почему не сделать гарем Нами и Робин с Луффи так получится классный сюжет
larmmason chapter 32 . 8/11
Thank you for giving us this great story too.
Good luck and Have a good life, Author-san.
Kuro.435 chapter 3 . 7/23
The conversations are too rushed like they didn’t even think before answering and the little girl didn’t know that Zoro was going to be executed in3 days at that time, it was only after she feed Zoro to rice balls and Luffy met helmeppo that they found out the truth
Kuro.435 chapter 2 . 7/23
Guess it was understandable about the rushing of “Dandan’s arc” but the Luffy’s talk with Shanks was too abnormal and rushed
Kuro.435 chapter 1 . 7/23
Here we go again
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1
Must have the same iq as Luffy to be writing this bad.
StoneTheLoner chapter 3 . 5/18
Wait a sec... You didn't do anything at all to explain why Luffy stayed for 17 years instead of setting sail earlier. Luffy has memories showing him how his loved ones suffered and are probably going through some very brutal experiences right then. Confidence and brashness have always and will always (At least in part) be some of Luffy's strongest character traits. So you add those 2 together with the new love he has for his Nakama and that's a powerful motivator to set out early and save his friends from their torments as soon as he can. He would have that certainty and confidence he could convince them to join up again even if he's changing things... but even if he couldn't he still saved them years of suffering. Even losing out on having them join him as companions again he loves them all enough to still do the right thing. To literally save his friends. Nami from years of slavery and crushing oppression, Robin from having the entire world against her and nothing to live for and Brook from his isolation and soul destroying loneliness.

Waiting 17 years when Luffy knows what some of them are going through is pure selfishness. It's outright character breaking! The only explanation I can think of is he feared changing events and losing the chance to add them to his crew. But that came at the expense of his friends themselves. He let them suffer so he could be sure they still joined later on. 100% you just made Luffy a horrible person and friend!
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 5/18
I'm not sure I liked this set up. The reason Shanks refused to take luffy was because he was just a brat, but now he's got the memories and powers of an older and more dangerous version of Luffy so maybe he would've this time? Sabo was important to characters in his original sphere of acquaintances so stopping that from happening would definitely thrown the hole revolution side of One Piece into chaos. And the original Luffy probably (presumably) wouldn't have known the CP9's Rokushiki so it's not like Luffy could call on his memories to train. Maybe Garp would have taught him, but you didn't show or even tell that happening. Then you failed to show how Luffy's change affected his relationships with his brothers. He definitely wouldn't be the same kind of kid so I could see them forming a completely different kind of opinion of him that isn't "That idiot" or "My idiot younger brother".

This is definitely a subpar start.
Nikkless chapter 5 . 5/13
the territory stuff is interesting but Luffy should have said to them to put flags after he gets his bounty
Nikkless chapter 5 . 5/13
feels like this is a summary of what happend in east blue
Nikkless chapter 3 . 5/13
wasent a dog it was a wolf
Nikkless chapter 2 . 5/13
pretty rushed
T-Aj71721291 chapter 32 . 5/11
You did a great job, but we're all waiting for you. Please take care.
T-Aj71721291 chapter 31 . 5/11
Ok. About being ashamed, please don't. This fic is too good to stop.
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