Chapters 21-25 were perfect! :D

Chapters 16-20 were perfect! :)

Chapters 14 and 15 were really interesting! :)

I'm not going to review all the chapters individually because I don't have time to, but overall, most of this is great so far! :)
I just want to stop right here and say that I'm really confused. If this flushing war between Zoe and Madame Pom is taking place *between* "Eve of Destruction" and "To Paris With Zoe," how exactly do they go from becoming friends at the end of "Eve of Destruction" to flushing each other down the toilet and then acting like friends in "To Paris With Zoe?" It would've made more sense if the flushing events took place before both episodes or after them, because otherwise, all the switching from friends to enemies to friends again just doesn't make sense to me.

I love this chapter! :D

Chapter 3-5 are really good, but I think that Penny Ling is a little OOC.
Overall, this is an interesting story, you only made a couple of spelling/grammar mistakes, and I like your writing style, so well done! :)

Considering how nice Madame Pom was in "To Paris With Zoe," she seems a little OOC, but other than that, I have no complaints.

Good start! :)

WTF IS THIS!? also zoe is too big to be flushed down a toilet she would get stuck