very good, White Knight forever!

lol love to see Ruby and Yang's reaction of finding out.

This is perfect, the way it's structured it really lends itself to a self-contained one-shot style. The characterisations and interactions were perfectly on point. I hope you and Maxaro eventually write a novel length, since you guys seem to have an innate understanding of Weiss' personality beyond the typical over-tsundere characterisations that you see in a lot of fanfiction.

Keep up the good work!

The feelings doesn't feel... that real. Loke it was rushed and stuff. Overally, white knight very good for me and this os okay. Nice story.

Pass this along to Max as well. You two did damn good with this, sitting on the back burner or not. He will be her rock. I'm a sucker for White Knight, and this shows why.

10/10

Hey, for a story that is unorigonal and cliche, It really kicks ass. I look forward to more of both of your work in the future!