Reviews for Project Mistless |
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Izzie0929 chapter 7 . 5/2 Great story! |
DarthVader7754 chapter 7 . 1/26 Oh no! I’m guessing you’re done with this story. Oh well. I really enjoyed it though! |
Valerious Lake chapter 7 . 11/9/2019 Well this is a very story. Maybe soldiers will now carry deagle pistol as a secondary weapon and a modify the 50 cal. Berrett sniper rifle in to a standard full automatic assault rifle and now wear an exoskeleton armor like call of duty advanced warfare. I hope this gets update |
JusticeNotRevenge chapter 3 . 8/25/2019 I like the way this is heading! It's got potential but I have a few points to make regarding the story. I spot several grammatical mistakes in your story so far. Some of them are not that big of a deal but they discredit the story. So, if you actually decide to write more(it has been 2 years), I'd be interested in beta-ing this. Also. Just, one more thing. I would like to recommend that you avoid using capital letters in the middle of the sentences... That's all for now |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/11/2019 Dude you seriously need to update it's been like 2 years your story is too amazing to just end here come on man pls update, and I'm not the only one who thinks you should a lot of people love your stories and if some of them don't like it well, f**k them. |
KitKatLovesUT chapter 7 . 3/9/2019 You have no idea how much it warms my heart to see one of these actually well-written! I've stumbled across so many, liked the idea, only only let down and see that they were littered with bad grammar, bad spelling, bad paragraphing, cheesy plotlines, unrealistic characters, Etc. You are an absolute god/dess XD |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/3/2018 Please update this story |
TheSilence l chapter 1 . 7/19/2018 i just have to ask if that was a james bond reference in the beginning |
thecool1 chapter 7 . 6/28/2018 OR WILL U SEE US ? : ( |
thecool1 chapter 6 . 6/28/2018 u said god IT HAS TO BE godS |
Alexzandria747 chapter 1 . 6/21/2018 this is probably my favorite version of the loss of the mist that I have ever read. I hope you pick it up again. love how you write. |
JaxiusTharn chapter 7 . 5/22/2018 does the mist falling affect The House of Life and Hotel Valhalla |
Guest chapter 7 . 1/5/2018 plz continue ts SO AMASZING! but can u plz make it a littler simple english and the demigods also have ADHD which i think ur forgetting becuse of which the whole thing sounds a bit more like(cant find the word) a bite more comedy type |
PuddlePirATEpro chapter 7 . 12/23/2017 please update soon, I love this story and I can't wait to see the next chapter |
SmoakAndArrow chapter 7 . 11/20/2017 Are you going to be continuing this story? I love it! |