Reviews for Benefits
Guest chapter 5 . 8/6
hi, idk if you’ll ever continue this fic but thank you so much for writing it. i love this story so much and i truly adore you’re writing and idk i just love how you wrote/write? their friends with benefits relationship while being besties? idk i’m sorry this is cheesy and stupid but i seriously love your writing so much, you’re so talented and inspired me to get back into writing. i owe a lot of my nalu love to you and your writing and mainly this story, whatever happens, even if u don’t finish it i just wanted to thank you for it. you’re writing is amazing so please never doubt your talents & and hope one day u come back to the nalu love land 3
Guest chapter 6 . 9/8/2019
it’s 2019 , please update !
racheln.tomlin chapter 5 . 12/9/2018
sis hurry up. I need more cupcakes.
Naluuuuuuuuu chapter 1 . 11/30/2018
Can someone please show this to Chris Evans
Guest chapter 4 . 10/17/2018
First the Cabbage man and now Sparky Sparky Boom man! You are a true A:TLA fan and I adore it.
80sAnime chapter 6 . 8/28/2018
Excited to see what u have in store for this!
Satyrykal chapter 6 . 8/16/2018
I am so infinitely curious as to how these two smooth things out in the end. As steamy as all this is, it is also the sweetest most romantic story ever. Pining is just the perfect word to describe them. My favourite story by youI hope one day it continues, though if notI love what we have so far.

Cheers,
Satyrykal
Guest chapter 4 . 7/7/2018
These are all so great
Guest chapter 6 . 6/8/2018
I love your stories so much! I love love love your Beserk rewrite and CANNOT wait for ypu to return to Benefits as well. I am dying to know how they finally confront their feelings. thanks for qriting this incredibly emotional fic!
Wolfcry77 chapter 5 . 5/23/2018
Still one of my favorite stories, I constantly re-read it. I can't help but wonder how they'll come around to telling each other how they feel or who's gonna be the one to say it first. So excited for whatever happens next
randommess1 chapter 6 . 4/22/2018
I will be here and waiting for you to get back to this story. it's steamy and nice how it all just fits together and it's nice how it's an easy read compared to your other more dramatic and intense stories but maybe I just want a sappy friends with benefits story with out the super drama. Keep it up I'm having fun reading my through your work
Guest chapter 5 . 4/8/2018
I love how you flush their characters and develop their relationship without the fuss of too much angst. They dont seem the type to be overly concern of affection esp. Natsu. Thank you. And please continue.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/16/2018
Wahhahaha. I like how Lucy tries to convey to natsu her thoughts by saying " we had sex" I think atleast 3 times? Anyways I loved this scene. Its just so good. So lucy/natsu type. XD
SassCassNL chapter 1 . 1/6/2018
I wish I would have found you sooner! I love all your NLu fics! (Berserk0woot woot!)This one especially, there is an actual story and character development with some lemons. You’re super talented and I can’t wait for this story to be updated.
Satyrykal chapter 1 . 12/9/2017
so I was thinking recentlyvbevuase I'm sure natauvand Lucy aren't supposed to be in this wired limbo forever, how would thing proceed and tip them over the edge? you're versions of Natsu and Lucy are usually very loyal to one another, and neither tends to be bitchy or controlling. so I thought, maybe someone would get jealous? Perhaps, though again, your natsu seems very in tune with Lucy.

then I thought, since you've mentioned him beofr, maybe it's going to be Laxus finding out? the overprotective cousin who doesn't want Lucy getting hurt and gives Natsu a hard time about it? that's my strongest bet.

though who knows, maybe for once they'll be the odd couple who doesn't go through angst and actually naturally admit this is more.

That's all, I just love this sorry and hope you pick it up again when you have more free time!

Cheers,
satyrykal
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