Hmmm, shame you never carried this on. It's good.

huh. interesting.

Stumbled on this gem, boy was it a wild ride. It was comedic but, it managed to tell the story quiet well. It even had character development.
This would be one of the more enjoyable stories that I had the pleasure of reading.

Good job 9.5/10. Very bueno.

'Praise the tits' and it's bountiful blessings.
I imagine their pose to be similar to mega milk.

Well, it sounded he was having a lot of fun. That's one way to sumarize the darksouls series.

...this aged really well but I gotta ask, Update?

I hope Loki meets her papa soon...

This is getting quite interesting I hope this is not dead with how long it’s been since it’s last updated

Kinda kills it for me, there was no need to make him weak if all he was gonna do is work in a bar, I also find it somewhat hard to believe that the oldest living being in the entire world would throw away all of their power no matter how “boring” it was. Still a good story but not my thing

Great story but you quit writing before you even reached the premise. I don’t believe I’ve ever seen something like that in my 5 years on this website. WHACK

Considering the experiences of Dark Souls and Cinder, I wouldn't be too surprised if Cinder made the Dungeon like 5000 floors deep.

Oh, I'm squealing like a child, the Painter and the friend of Cinder in the Kiln, most notably Oscar, Solaire, and Seigmeyer good to see them around. Heres hoping Crossbreed Priscilla comes around.

The Dungeon as Cinder's daughter, I can see the oncoming mess.
"The monsteras are my grandkids?" Cinder throes Ottar out a window "OUTTA THE WAY, PAPA NEEDS TO SEE HIS BABES!"

one of the stupidest fanfics i have had the displeasure of reading. fucking annoying.
im dropping this shit.

nerf shit

fucking boring stupid shit