XD T.T this is too cute

Cinderella. what s great reference to a fantastic musical.

Elsa is not into dating boys. "Who needs a man to save and kiss you!?" - Queen Elsa.

when'd the sequeeeeeeelllll!?

Soooo many regerences to other movies! Ahhhh xD why must you kill him when I had fallen in love with the story?

Read through the story in one day, your grammar definitely could use some work, but it got better the later it got, for all grammatical errors I recommend finding somebody to proofread just to clean up most of the spelling grammar stuff.

As for the fic itself, I liked it. Not the best thing I read, but definitely an entertaining read. The ideas behind it were really interesting, and while I'm not normally a shipper of Elsa/Hans (I prefer the idea of Elsa being alone), I did find myself rooting for them a lot during the course of the fic. I do like the idea of Hans being a good guy deep down, just raised by a bad family given that I do think there's a lot that Hans did in the beginning of the movie that couldn't be faked.

I'd like to know how the trolls played into anything. The fact that we never learned anything more about if they did anything or if the magic was Elsa's fae magic left me confused, and the reveal that Hans was probably alive in the author's note was really obvious given that Elsa would likely have died due to Elsa's pain.

Anyways, I guess I should end this by saying good fic overall, little issues hear or there, but overall, well done.

Fascinating end. Wondering how he got out of this one!

What?! Hans is dead but not dead. And his son has fire powers?! How?
At least his brothers became humans again and protect Elsa like their sister.

Ahhhhh

I hope shes not as overprotective as the Queen in "tale of tales",. That movie is weird,

I will look for the story later.

You have a loot of explanations to do.

another sequel?! *squeals* I thought it was gonna be snowwhite-ish, you know, not.. Red riding hood.

Runo, Rudi and Valhalla got what they deserved. Anna married Kristoff, Karen and Rothbard are together as it appears and Hans married Elsa. The meeting of the girls with Iduna and all that was revealed was a touching moment, as it was the new paintings with all their families together. What about Hans' brothers? Are they gonna stay in their animal form?

Ahhhhhhh!

Is perfect! I need more please, you have to say wath happened to everione.

i swear to god if his brothers don't get a happy ending too...

Agnaar has changed, he apologized to Hans and Anna. It seems the Arendelle family would be whole again and with the addition of a few new members. I expected for Hans to speak for them, because that is how Amelia and Alexander had raised him. As for the punishment of Valhalla and her sons...if not prison, I think exile with having nothing at all in their possesion. Arendelle is too good place for them, even if they would work like servants.

Yesssss

I have a sugestion, makethem work the sewers ( i dont know the name for the bathrooms and "cañerias"?)

More please, i lobe it, and you forgot the w*** s punishment. irenneee, what is her punishment...

Are Hans clottles like Agdar?