Mika is in another Hiram? Ok he is now the player of all gundam. The third girl better be Neo.

Damn. Even here Mika is getting pussy like an absolute Chad XD

Great can’t wait for the next chapter

Tekkadan is not joining Beacon to used as chess pieces right, because I would like for them to rebuild their organization and not be influenced by outside forces. Also, do NOT bring back Iok Kujan. We already had enough of that disgrace of commander & pilot back in the post disaster era.

Would Tekkadan get an airship?

I'm waiting for akihiro vs his brother's killer as the successor against predecessor of Gusion.

I really like your story but I’m having trouble following what happed during chapters 5-7.

From what I understand is that while Masahiro is being healed and Tekkadan is staying in that village, Gaileo and Mcgillis are shown to be in the world of remnant and are trying to change their ways because their gundam are disappointed. After this in chapter 6, the attack on beacon happens and Tekkadan and gaileo are there to help out. In chapter seven masahiro runs into his old boss and akahiro rushes to attack him.

How did Tekkadan get to beacon in such a short amount of time?
I thought that gaileo was in vacuo not vale.

If you explained this already, I’m sorry for being inattentive and would like to have these details pointed out to me.

Thank you for writing this great fic and I hope to see where your going to take us.

I’d say things are starting to get interesting!

Not gonna lie...THAT WAS AWSOME

Hey bladwolf unknown reader here again I hope you continue this amazing story also do you Have idea of tekkadan attacking slavers and freeing faunus and then joining making the group mix of races and is doing what whitefang should been doing being coexesiting with others and I am also I whole independent thing as we'll also I am going to happy when their faunus of their group learns what their brothers and sister's did at vale it will give them a reason to hate Adam for what did and not even lieing about the their leader being killed by human won't save him because in their eyes all they see is nothing but a monster a madman and a traitor who made everything go wrong heck I wouldn't even care if one his own killed him it shows flaws in the world his trying build any my idea I hope it help's your story bye.

You know, there is a surprisingly low amount of RWBY in this RWBY crossover. That been said, this story has potential, I was expecting them to turn into armored versions of their Suits, but I didn't expected han sized MS. Not bad but this better be explained in due time.

The pacing however, could do a bit of work. Is not too fast is incomprehensible, but you jump scenes a bit too quickly. By the lines of [scene change] I understand you see it more as retelling events from a TV show rather than a regular writing. I would suggest to forego the TV aspect and give the narrative a more fluid form.

However, the way the [ ] are used to set a place do work, as it fits into the militaristic setting of IBO, however I would also suggest not to abuse them every time you made a change of scenery. It works when its from one location to another (as in different towns or cities) but not so much when you change to different rooms of the same building (that's just an example). In such cases, a simple explanation of "outside, X and Y..." can work just as well without disrupting the pace.

Finally, I applaud must of the characters, specially the MS. They fit well with what they were supposed to be: Karis is an arrogant knight as it was made for a justing type of combat, Flauros was a sniper thus had a more "educated" feel to it.l, and Barbatos its blunt as his weapons. The only character I have a quip with would be Mika himself. He is way too emotional and talkative, while OG Mika is a sociopath, here he comes way more empathetic. I feels, off. I don't say "make him sadistic or gory", no! But keep most of his dialogue short and his inquiries simple, as that is how he function: the more simple and effective approach to anything. By example, he wouldn't give a damn about being in another world but he would worry about those left behind (granted, you did write that second part properly, he show concern but got over it rather quickly).

So that is my two... Very long cents on this fic. Again, I see potential in your idea and look forward to see where do you take it and how much can you grow as a writer.

Sincerely, V.
Happy new year and good luck on your writing!

You're story's very interesting but I think it's better that you don't put mika with ruby my reasons why is because she will get on his nerve's anyway if they run into Adam's or Cinder's group make sure they know who they'r messing with because they will regret it.

Fucking short as hell

Than why not branch off from the canon timeline or find a way to fill those plot holes with this crossover. By the way, could you possibly give Tekkadan a few airships(depending on what kingdom they are on because each have their own designs) to be used as mobile bases also isn't the Gundams a standard 20 meters height mobile suit?

Lastly, my condolences to your grandfather.

Can you add ASW-G-35 Gundam Hajiroboshi? If not then RWBY is mess up. Follow for now.