Reviews for Clarke's first heat
Redwrex chapter 24 . 4/21
beautifully
Kristy chapter 8 . 10/8/2019
Why would it be ok to call her a dick, in anger?
Kristy chapter 7 . 10/8/2019
I thought she could call her by name if they were in private?
Lyn0331 chapter 8 . 10/3/2019
I know I am a little late here, but I just wanted you to know I love your story. Some elements of it are a little tough for me, due to my past, but it is actually also helping me to sort through feelings that have been either repressed or things that I totally blocked out. I just want to say never stop writing you have a talent that is not many others have. I know some have been critical in some areas, but as a writer it is all good. In order to hone a craft and get better, one has to practice. I see the growth with every chapter in every story you write. Keep up the good work.
arizonarobbinsss chapter 8 . 5/6/2018
I always laugh when I see 'hehe' Idk why
Enkmenessa chapter 24 . 4/2/2018
Well done thank you! What an awesome read
Allyon chapter 24 . 4/3/2018
Thank you for the story.
SophiaFox17 chapter 24 . 4/3/2018
Love it 100% ok with this chapter but what about octavia and raven story? But still love how it ended
LauratheChef chapter 23 . 3/18/2018
I am 100% okay with how this chapter turned out, I like seeing Clarke treated as an equal even as an omega. Clarke being a slave is a bit too extreme for me, but i still enjoy the story regardless. whatever you decide to have things go in your story is very much alright with me.
SophiaFox17 chapter 22 . 3/16/2018
This is great can’t wait for the next one...I am sorry for what happened and hope that it gets better...it will get better
SophiaFox17 chapter 20 . 3/16/2018
Can’t wait to read what happens next
SophiaFox17 chapter 20 . 3/16/2018
Sooooooo good thank you for updating
Enkmenessa chapter 22 . 3/9/2018
I would read your story. I’m sorry for what has been happening in your life. I love your stories but life gets in the way, take care of you and make you okay first we’ll be here. I love the new update
Enk
Guest chapter 21 . 2/18/2018
Love it can't wait for more.. And I wish you finish the one you did of Clarke and Octavia
LauratheChef chapter 21 . 2/18/2018
glad illian is ok,this chapter was equally part great and weird :)
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