Omg i am so happy you still are willing to finish this— thank you so much! Your writing makes me smile, I am so proud...!

I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for , and congratulations on your book as well, please and thank you.

I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

I really love the what if storyline. I think it's super interesting and sweet. I kinda hope you do a couple more of those, maybe exploring Aster dealing with his kid being a guardian and still being a parent? Either way I hope you post more!

I'll look forward to whatever updates still come for this story and I wish you lots of succes with your book!

Yeah I've read this series before and didn't realize this, and I probably wouldn't if I hadn't just rewatched this either ... but this chapter def drew inspiration from Kickin' It. Kai and Jack with the magic stones, and Rudy breaking everything

You have definitely seen/read Percy Jackson. Wanna read the next one!

You have definitely read Percy Jackson haven't you. This is very similar. It is still good though.

nice new chapter it was great please continue this story

aww... Baby bunny Jack... SO CUTE!

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

Did you just steal the plot of Titan’s Curse from Percy Jackson?
Awesome story tho. I hope Jack gets a pooka form, it’s be adorable.

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

Please continue the what if. I would love to see Jack remember Aster and the others.

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.