Reviews for Naruto: El Entretenimiento de Kushina (Adoptada)
Re Lovely Lover chapter 12 . 7/21
Seriously no to sharing with other guys.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 11 . 7/21
Why the hell would you set him up with Mei only to hook her up with another guy?

Then turn around and say that she will also be part of the harem to cheat on him and have Naruto share Mei with another guy?

There was absolutely no need to add another guy at all or have him sharing anyone. Especially someone who is already single. I dont understand this decision in the slightest.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 6 . 7/21
* Post meant for previous chapter *

Why in the fuck would he even consider let alone ask his mom to go to the party when it's clear Sasuke just wants to fuck his mom.

Also he wants to keep it a secret shes his mom yet is going to expose her to even more male friends to risk discovery?

He already had the one event that made no sense and has already put discovery at risk and let his friends cum on his mom. Why the fuck take even greater risk and so it again with more guys?
Re Lovely Lover chapter 5 . 7/20
Yes, now that I think about it, she has control over the company where your husband works. When Naruto starts her working life, I could recommend her so that she doesn't spend too much time in a small position and the Harem doesn't disintegrate.

- Wouldnt it make more sense for the head of the harem to not work? Hell multiple stupidly rich members theres not even a need.

He should be dedicated to the harem and eventually the children. Using free time to have dates, hobbies and the like. Not using free time to divide his attention 2 dozen ways which isnt possible.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 3 . 7/20
Wtf with that harem companions. Shouldnt be any guys around who might try to join.

Also I'm confused that Tsume is there but not Hana.

Also having such a large list and adding Samui but ignoring the other 3 from Kumo.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 2 . 6/30
- Forgive me, I wanted to protect my mom and I ended up like this

_ I don't understand this line. How were his actions protecting his mother?
Re Lovely Lover chapter 1 . 6/30
That's an unbelievably dumb premise. Act like a stripper or they wont talk to me anymore?

For him to think that.
For her to do it.

Letting them nut on her and other risks.

Not to mention they'll come over more on their own and fantasize about her. What happens when they visit and run into his mom? While they dont have pictures to blackmail her for sex this setup seems like the dumb ntr doujin setups where the wife becomes a plaything for others just because of the "threat" of saying they will say something even with no proof.
tobi1091 chapter 15 . 5/24
por mí no importa el tiempo mientras no dejes morir la historia, suerte compañero
Mizuho Gonzalez chapter 15 . 4/28
ya no hay actualización por favor
Mizuho Gonzalez chapter 15 . 4/28
ya no hay actualización por favor
Angel chapter 15 . 1/2
Esta bueno, se a de poner bueno lo de hanabi... Como opinión, una reunión del harem...
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2019
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Kevin4491 chapter 15 . 11/30/2019
Fue un gran capitulo Oziel, se ve el esfuerzo que inviertes jejeje, en cuanto a ideas... que tal una escena de exhibicionismo en la azotea de un edificio en la noche.
Jerson Vasquez Zuiga chapter 15 . 11/30/2019
Hombre me encanta tu historia y si lo subes a la otra plataforma mucho mejor y mas te inspiraras
Yamete Onii-Chan chapter 15 . 11/27/2019
Thanks for the chapter
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