Reviews for Let's Be Young |
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![]() ![]() OMG I love this please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, I forgot how good this story was. I know you haven't updated in years, but I'd love to see where you took it for the rest of the movies. I hope you finish writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, i wish there was more. I really love this. I remember reading the original. As it seems ive already commented oon the 13th chapter this is here lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update i cant wait until she sees jesse again |
![]() ![]() ![]() You still working on tgis right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I've read this story about 5 times now and it just keeps getting better. Hope you update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hells yeah! This is what I call a f***in awesome fanfiction. Just wish it had more Jesse in it. Hope Myckie and Jesse met again soon. Totally ship them together. Can wait to read more! Love your oc. Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ASDFGHJKL YOURE WRITING AGAIN! Hell Yea! I loved the original story and it's coming up and up again! I hope you're doing well my dude! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is boring. when's dotty getting the limelight? booo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon it's a great story |
![]() ![]() Not to piss in your cornflakes but as Brian is under deep cover as a cop, there is no way he'd be allowed to tell his sister where he is or what he's doing, never mind hang out with her and involve her in the job... Thus the whole story doesn't work because unless the sister comes in after the film when they know Brian was a cop she can't be there. I couldn't over look that crucial point enough to want to read the story. This just isn't possible with how being an undercover officer works, plus Brian was desperate to make detective at the start of the film and he would surely know that sharing confidential info with anyone, even his sister, would certainly scupper his plans and maybe even get him fired. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |