Great story

Amazing, I’m sad now because I have nothing left to read :(

I missed this story so much.

Been waiting for this for so long.

Whoa, this story had evolved. A lot. Good job!

I kinda wish Obi Wan joined Anakin, not as Master and Apprentice but as equals and perhaps learn to save Satine for Obi Wan.

Can I just say... I feel bad for Obi-Wan.

The amount of times I said holy shit while reading this chapter is too much.

Ohhhh man. What a powerful chapter. Vaderkin is pissed and wants his children back. Oh man oh man. Poor Mara. Poor Padme once she hears what has happened. But now Luke and Leia and Han are all together.

Amazing chapter. Really curious as to how this is going to end.
I hope Leia and Luke can free Han... and is the princess finally seeing the light?
Poor Padmé btw caught in the middle of all these emotional Force users!

I love your writing.
Awesome chapter! Hard as it is to read the Skywalker family falling apart, it fills me with fascination for the storytelling.

Oh man that last paragraph was great! Chills.

Poor Mara! Imagine her disappointment

So is Luke a Grey Jedi or just a full pure Jedi? Because I personally think he should go full blown Grey and balance the force.

This is a fanfic like a fanfic ought to be. This is an epic film put down to words... Filled with thrilling sequences. Space travel. Battles. Using (unlike Disney) a number of planets to carry the different parts of the story. Character development. Romance. Painful moments. Conversation between characters we know and love. Simply great work I found here.
Keep it up!