where's the rest of this?

interesting story...where's the rest?

It's not confusing because like atlas. The city is the kingdom and the kingdom is the city.

Hi I had the same thing happened to me before. So do not get to stressed out, any way get take your time do not rush things. So that’s it. Any way see yay I really like the Naruto and RWBY fanfic please do change it was getting really good. An just have fun with the story.

I had to stop on this chapter.

Overall the general idea of Naruto reincarnating as Yang is really good. She is very similar to Naruto in terms of looks and character. She is cheerful, brash and reckless as Naruto. I thought that this fic will be about how Naruto is trying to integrate himself in this new female body in new world, while having caring family and real friends.

Instead you are just gifting main character with OP powers, literally for no reason. No wonder this fic on HIATUS. I hope in future will write better version of this fic

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I hope you chose to update this story soon please.

pair yang/naruto with kurama please and what happend to the one and eight tails

Please continue with your work it’s so good

This was a funny and interesting experience, although your writing could use some work...

Jaune x Yang

Firewall (Jaune X Yang)

Jaune X Yang

oh i'm sure you lost interest in this story because of the MANY OC you shove into this! chapter 11 and 12 was Ridiculous really! sharingan?! ugh.. I hope you rewrite the entire thing, because, the more i read Yang is just Yang, no Naruto in her personality.. he was a War-Veteran right? it should bring more impact on Yang's personality change becoming more mature, not Naruto becoming more childish and reckless.. the story Idea is good but the development is just very disappointing..

this is one of the best stories i have read on this app...and i normaly never reveiw...so yea please continue