Amazing story from start to finish. Great job of show not tell. Great plot. Great dialogue. Great characterization. Beautiful.

Muh-cree hahaha. Any time someone picks one of these characters I am always going to pick the other one because of this story.

Sweet, I have a new author to follow.

The simple fact that you know bullets travel faster than sound fills me with joy. Some very intelligent and clever writing afoot.

Muh-cree has had me chuckling all day. Top quality writing.

Wow sombra was right mcree is a pervert

oink this was pretty good oink

Solid thumbs up I absolutely loved this

OH MY GOD I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! Your writing kept me captivated the entire time and I spent a solid 4ish hours reading it straight through! Couldn't put it down! You captured these characters so perfectly that I could literally hear all their conversations in their voices. That is an amazing gift that not many people can accomplish and I can only dream of getting close too. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I will be looking at some of your other work if available! Thank you for a wonderful story!

Some nice lemon always good

This is so beautiful. Touching and well written. Good job

What a way to end the story. Boy am I impressed. That last little sentence is a fantastic, poetic and also rather authentic way to give these two characters a happy ending (I remember watching Sombra's VA do a video on her YouTube with Matt Mercer where she pronounced it Muh-cree, and it being able to remind so well of how the Overwatch team are is proof you've done the characters proud). I know it took me a while to come back and finish off, but with your writing style the way it is, I could not be more glad- not a single chapter of this story was without eloquent and beautiful and unique descriptions of even the most mundane things, and not a single character was written in a way that made me doubt their authenticity or a way that bored me.

Kudos, man. You've finished something rather phenomenal here.

solid thumbs down

Magic. Beautiful description. Took away my breath. Definetely a masterpiece worth of a book publishing. Good job dude, and don’t forget that you’re amazing

This story was an amazing read from start to finish. I'm almost at a loss for words when it comes to describing just how well everything was written. Descriptive detail was woven in so seamlessly and it enhanced each picture and event. This is easily one of my absolute favorite Overwatch stories, and the ending was so strong. I know what "perfect" means and how often it's used as hyperbole, but perfect is exactly what the last paragraph in the epilogue is. I hope you continue to write, because you're really skilled and anyone who comes across your work is in for a real treat.