Some minor plot points but i love this, it feels like an evolution

Heh, plumbing... oddly fitting for a 'Poppypants'.

Keep the good writing.

Cool job, as always. And yeah, Poppypants is a scientist so he can find ways around the ring's limitations.

Keep the good writing.

Very good one, and yeah, Bikini Woman wouldn't be affected by water.

Keep the good writing.

Hey, cool job here.

keep the good writing.

Like where this is going

Nice idea with the aliens.

Looks like Jenny has an ace up her sleeve. Good start

I'm going to be completely honest.
I never showed much interest in captain underpants until I saw the movie.
When I want to watch a movie, I do mass research on it.
This fanfic is amazing. It's clean, so move it to the u don't understand go to my page)
I really want to see what happens next!

Hi there! I just wanted to say that I really loved this story! I've been reading a lot of these Captain Underpants fanfictions lately. And I'd totally love to see more!

is this story supposed to be based on the books or the movie?

is this story supposed to be based on the books or the movie?

Jenny holding a conversation with Melvin Sneedly. Interesting.

This is a good start. I'm interested and look forward to reading more.

I already like Jenny. She is really smart and I think the boys will need her if the three of them become friends. She'll be like the Hermione Granger of the trio. It would be sweet for them to have a platonic relationship with each other.

The characters are actually in character which is rare especially in fanfics now a days.

Just make sure you don't turn Jenny into a Mary Sue, that's always an issue when you have an OC in a fanfic.

Other than that, I can't wait until the next chapter! :)