So freaking cute and sweet and adorable. I love that he’s still slightly scared of her lol. The ending just made me smile

This has everything! Fluff, smut, a tiny bit of angst. And everything is soooo good! I loved the pillow talk after the smut, it had me squealing! So cute! And the final reveal, I died laughing!

Nice job with this one. I like how you made an intimate encounter out of a simple automail checkup. That was really unique and fitting for the characters. Also the writing was really good. The dialogue felt natural and proper based on how both of them act in the series. Good ending too.

The one thing that didn't feel right was the part about where Ed said Al was going to ask Mei to marry him, because this doesn't seem to take place very long after the end of the series, and if that's the case, then they are way too young for that. But that part wasn't really a vital part of the story, so it doesn't really detract from it at all.

This is amazing! I love your characterization. They're so cute and stubborn. Great job!

LOVE THIS. SO PERFECT

I'm so hormonal this almost made me cry. Beautiful.

I was actually thinking this reminded me of one of Len's doujinshi! I love all her IY and FMA work and this fic was great! Steamy with just enough bickering to make it uniquely Ed and Winry :D

Lovely. Thanks for sharing

Excellent! It was the perfect balance of smut and fluff with a tiny bit of angst. I ADORED the ending, and I you did a great job keeping their personalities consistent. Good work!

A lovely, well paced fic! I loved the ending so much!

What a cute story!

Totally awesome!

I loved your story! It was so them!

Loved it! I absolutely adore this couple and am glad that you posted this! I'm not exactly familiar with the person you mentioned, but I'll definitely be sure to check her out!

Love this! I follow Len's doujinshis as well and this really seems like one she would recreate as illustrations. Bravo! Thank you for your own talent. :)