Reviews for Get On Your Feet
Therealact4ever chapter 1 . 8/13/2017
this is so sweet I love it and it kind of reminds me of Percy Jackson
katmar1994 chapter 1 . 7/14/2017
I love it already! It's so cute! Are you gonna do another one-shot with the Lars and the off colors?
avidreaded chapter 1 . 7/7/2017
Ah. I see that nose tweak of a fusion joke.
PrairieDawn chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
It's funny how people who understand social anxiety (or diagnoseable Social Anxiety Disorder) get Lars, and people who don't just think he's a jerk.
Orange Dash chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
Nice, I liked reading this.
Geckomom chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
cute!
malandy chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
Lars knows a bit about music! Cool!

I thought Padparadscha and Rhodonite might fuse into an Off-Color Sardonyx, but no, or at least not yet.

Nice musing here!

Well, it's complete, but it doesn't mean there can't be sequels... *shrugs*

Typos:

each other('s) sentences

help the top held the top ?

skull an(d) internal bleeding
F-ckthesystem125 chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
I like it. Is this only a one-shot?
queenlaur chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
I can see you've put a lot of thought into the changes Lars may have gone through on top of the ones we already know about. I like the different reasons Lars came up with for why he wasn't as scared or freaking out. I like to think it's the combo of feeling comfortable around the off colors and having a protective/machure mindset that he developed towards them and Steven.

Seance he was the only one who could really do anything against the robots without having them attack him in return, he kind of got an ace in the hole feeling and for the first time felt he had to and could help. Pulse he did have a few miner freak outs after he was brought back to life, the one where he realized he might be a zombie, when his hair glowed, when he was told the off colors wouldn't leave him, and when he shouted that Steven was arguing with him.

It's always fun to see what others think about the same scene and see what new revelations are revealed. Great work on showing the relationships that are growing between Lars and the gems. You got an amazing attention to detail in your story and I enjoyed every minute of reading it.