I really love this.

This kind of reminds me of the lunar chronicles what with the cyborg mechanic rich guy and sassy friend pointing out the grease on her forehead

Ooh, I adore this! I've wanted to read Cinder for the longest time, my can never seem to pick it up! Coming from someone who doesn't know the book, this is delightful! Felicity's dad backstory fits in nicely with this world. And of course Felicity would totally own her cybernetic parts. (Sidenote, I would like a retina display!)
Can't wait to read the follow-up!

ooohh yeah, I loved this the 1st 2nd and 3rd time I reread all your stuff and now I get more well that is just never a bad thing as always thank you and keep up the awesome work XD

This is a wonderful story!

I wasn't disappointed, I am excited :) I read "A Universe of Endless Possibilities" a few times and even commented there (if I remember correctly) that most of the stories, if not all, are just too good to be left as one chapters.
Good to know you agree ;-) and, perhaps, you'll even reconsider posting part 2 as a separate complete story and just adda a new chapter here (hopeful puppy eyes)?
Whatever you decide, thank you for sharing. It's always a pleasure to read your stories.