did THE dumbledore call someone ecentric

hagrid promising not to tell dumbledore is the equivalent of a sworn blood oath

I salute your music choice xomrade
is that skeleton skulduggery pleasant?

are we sure the crouches aren't distant cousins of the Hitlers

you are an evil pickle rickroll

has anyone wondered why wizards need such huge baths, hmmm

technically Harry is a motherfucker because yasaka

What a bitch. Maybe don't write if you're too stupid to finish the story?

You know it wasn't a bad story could have used some well character research to get a better handle on personalities such as how words are said, and how certain characters would be like but understandable as this is a fanfic, but all in all not a bad read wish you would have finished it instead of just spoiling it at the end though.

It’s a shame this story was discontinued

It’s very good

So, despite being able to absolutely crush Voldemort, Harry has to resort to going crazy to do it? Talk about a pathetic lack of self-control. Kunou being injured is just an ass-pull meant to inject unneeded angst for some reason then.

Wait, so you're just going to leave Lily behind? WTH?! She's well on her way of becoming totally disillusioned with Magical Britain and her failures of husband and son, has shown attraction to Harry, and is a total MILF. What reason is there for her to remain behind in this backward swamp? Whatever, I imagine that Lily will come to her senses and get together with her son.

Looking at your profile, I see that this is the second story you started to write, per chronological order. It's good that you've the self-awareness and integrity to admit the atrocious aspects of this story, namely: the inane deviations from the main plot, Harry's uninspired edgelord behaviour, and pointless injections of your tastes for music and video games into the story. If you ever decide to rewrite this story though, I believe you can do a much better job of it.

Well I completely understand Harry's reaction to him placed in an unwanted, not to mention unconsulted, marriage contract, his attitude towards Amaterasu is just so pathetic. Instead of directly confronting her and asking why his lover thought she could just do what she did without telling him, he just sulks like a child who got bitchslapped.

I hope Harry adds Grayfia to his pride. I've never understood why someone of Grayfia's standing and lineage would demean herself by marrying and serving the completely overrated Sirzechs.

Wow, Harry is so hardcore~! Yeah, right. He's a ridiculous and aspiring edgelord. Normally he's CONSTANTLY talking about his irrelevant tastes in music and gaming, but as soon as other refuse to indulge in his ridiculous behaviour, he becomes an emo little bitch.

Wow, who knew Lily is a mute? Sarcasm aside, when the hell is she going to grow a spine and tell James to fellate himself. And more importantly, when is she going to fuck her son?

The sex scene is decent.

So when is Lily going to impale herself on her son's superior do dick and divorce her weakling of a husband?