UPDATE NOW!

his powers aren't o.p. i think it needs to become deadlier

lol

When will you update new chapters?

dude I love this story I really hope you decide to continue it in the future

So cute. Love the fierce Marco you have crafted in your story. Would love to see more, know where Ludo/Toffee come in, see more of his training takes shared, and the cute little dragon deserves some more detail in my opinion. A lot of room to expand on this, cannot wait to see where you take it.

please continue

Awsome story, hope to see more in the future.

This story is awesome! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Though I see that you haven’t been too active since school started. Well hope you get active again once it’s out’

Pls update i really like this also make like one of marcos powers were he can transform into like a fire demon like eldiablo did in suicide squad
Also make one of marcos powers like a last resort were he sacrifices himself like inplodes himself to save mewnie when he is in the final battle with toffe not saying he will but just an idea

You should make one of marcos powers like he can turn into like a fire demon when he is super charged with sacred fire like eldiablo did in suicide squad or make him like implode himself as a last resort to save mewnie and defeat toffie in the blast but then star goes like on a weird journey to save him or bring him back Id like to see that just some cool suggestions

Please update! I’ve been waiting for a while and I LOVE this fic so it’d be great if you could update soon!

This is a great story, please continue it.

You need to fix your capitalization errors. For some reason you have no problems using capital I's in your notes but most of the time in your story it is left as i instead of I. Also Hekapoo's portal is yellow or golden btw. But eh, it's only the first chapter.

Please update, I've been waiting over two months now and it's killing me