This was my first time reading a Ron/Draco story, and boy will it be a tough act to follow! I absolutely loved the build-up scenes-the parts where they ran into each other in the halls, and in the hospital wing. Those interactions were captivating. I've no doubt I'll be coming back to experience it several times more.

Thanks for sharing your work with us!

I like it
Thanks

Your characterisation is perfect

OMG i love this. "you have freckles on your lips"
such a good part.

You write beautifully and this a wonderful story!

Retches

Would love more!

Cute! Escalation was a bit fast, but I think it works for a one-shot over long drawn-out chaptered. Nice to fit in around the standard narrative, don't always see that angle being used.

In short, would read again? :)

Sooooo... where's the rest?
What do you mean " complete"?
I don't understand. I-I don't understand. There has to be more!

I hate you and I love you. Two of my favorite couples in a story and it's amazing. And it's a damn one shot. PleaS excuse me while I go yell in frustration into my pillow.

Okay I'm back. Anyway, amazing writing. I have nothing bad to say at all. It was perfect t and it's going in my favorites.

it was a lovely new one-shot, thanks ever so much.

Okay first of all, I just wanted to say that you have turned me into a hater. I used to couldn't STAND Ron to an extent, but WHOA NELLY, I LOVED THIS.