| Reviews for A Revelation of Desire |
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   cigarettesandbruisedhips chapter 3 . 1/7 Ahhhh so good. Hope you come back |
| suliswrites chapter 3 . 10/28/2019 Love this! You write them so well. I see that it's been a while since your last update, but I do so hope you continue this tale. I adore your dialogue. Cheers, suliswrites |
| aliduck chapter 3 . 5/19/2018 I am enjoying this even more than 'A Repulsion of Denial'. I do hope you return to add more to this story... |
| aliduck chapter 2 . 5/19/2018 I thought you wrote the Ron/ Hermione scene convincingly, he was enthusiastic but paled in comparison to Lucius. |
| aliduck chapter 1 . 5/19/2018 Wow, such passion. I loved it. The last line is brilliant, "nothing tore at me as much as the knowledge that all I wanted was to do it again." (A thought echoed by your readers!") |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/21/2018 Oooh, I just read the companion piece and then clicked on this one! Awesome work, I live seeing both POVS and the development of H and L's relationship |
| Sunnyraider chapter 3 . 10/31/2017 Hi there ! Just a quick message to let you know that I really enjoy your story so far. I loce the settings, the characters and your write quute well. :-) Do you intend to continue it ? Please please please with a cherry on top. |
| lilikaco chapter 3 . 9/7/2017 Wow. How do you write them SO PERFECTLY?! |
| RiverTamXO chapter 3 . 8/4/2017 I love these stories, and I adore your writing style. I hope you do merge other things you've written or at least give us your other pen names! |
| pgoodrichboggs chapter 3 . 7/27/2017 Hot chapters! |
| Midnight Lilly chapter 3 . 7/26/2017 I guess the wizarding world does not believe in safesex. |
| kalilje chapter 3 . 7/26/2017 this is really amazing. I have been looking forward to read a new Lumione because they are my favorite pairing . I look forward to read more. |
| kalilje chapter 2 . 7/26/2017 oh my cliffhanger xD |
| kalilje chapter 1 . 7/26/2017 Oh a great start :D |
| Kissme007 chapter 3 . 7/26/2017 They really have a sizzling chemistry and I like how Lucius didn't hesitate in getting her back. Looking forward for more :) |
