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D'awwwwwwwww~! *W*

Sure, yes, ineed, this is~rather on the short side, but hey, y'know what they said: short and sweet~ As sweet as the delish choco Naotora got for her beloved Mai~ She was soooo~cuuuuute and precious and luv and Mai was wonderful, wonder~ful~ And hey, more chocolate means more feeding each other and indirect kisses~ 8D

So cute, so cute, short, sweet and cute~ *W*

Happy Valentine's Day, Yuri-chan!

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you know naotora li she from samurai warriors

Man Ayane put Nao through the ringer with that one. I almost thought she didn't have it that time because of the close calls. But maybe this is what she needed to help her break out the shell she keeps herself inside. I'd like to see how long Kasumi and Ayane will last in the story.

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Welp~ While you had "Anima Yell!" on the brain before, you now have "Warriors All-Stars" on the brain instead. 8D

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Naotora and Mai's daily lives need a little shake-up every now and then, something new, something action-packed, for a change~ :3

Ayane challenging Naotora out of nowhere, oh man~ My goodness, she's quite harsh, but she isn't necessarily unfair. She's a tough cookie, that Ayane. LOL She has good intentions, but she's rough around the edges. LOL

Fortunately, Naotora here? She definitely stood up to the challenge! :D That's Mai's beloved for ya~! *O* Naotora proved why she's the perfect waifu for the pride and joy of the Shiranui Ryu, as well as Ayane and Kasumi's childhood friend. :3

This was so~badass. That fight scene was absolutely badass and oh so beautifully choreographed. My goodness! *O* So badass. Just, so badass~

Great work, Yuri-chan~! This was awesome~ I wonder what will get in your head next! ;D

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Welp~ At the time of you writing this, Yuri-chan suuuure~had "Anima Yell!" on the brain, amirite~? ;D

Like, (snickers) this just reeks~of "Anima Yell!", and it's a very nice smell, fo' shu, and no, I have no idea what I just said~ XD

This was suuuuu~per cute, soooo~silly, soooo~pretty~ ;3 Like, hoooh *dayum~* this was pwetteh! Mai and Naotora in dem cheerleading outfits...ooouuu~ *O*

And after the fantastic, su~per athletic choreography and cheer comes, well..y'know, what always~happens when Naotora and Mai are in a room together, just~the two of them...with Nao-chan in her exquisite undies~ ;D Mmmmmm! *O*

Wonder~ful work, Yuri-chan! Thank goodness for "Anima Yell!" and Mai and Naotora and their love~! *O*

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This. Was. So~Effin'~Romantic. Oh my goodness I can't even. *O* Romantic, romantic, soooo~romantic, oh wow! *O*

That's all~I have to say here. *O* Great work!

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Truth-san...I couldn't possibly agree more~

And welp~ Naotora, ohhh Naotora, oh Nao-chan. She. Dun. Goofed~ She just dun goofed~ *W*

She only has herself to blame for Mai, her future wife, glomping her like that~ My goodness~ My goodness, my goodness. D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~! *W*

Nao-chan makes a fantastic domestic goddess for Mai, without a single doubt! Also, dem hugs~ Haaah, Mai, oh Mai, she's so touchy~feely~ (Heart)

This was friggin' adorbz~ Great work! X3

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With the way they carry on you'd think they were already married. I can never get enough of Nao's shyness

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Peeping Tom? Overrated! Peeping Mai? Hell yeah~! *O*

LOL

This was so~silly~ So, so, so very silly yet soooo~cute and kiiiind~a sexy and just, my goodness~ *W* Mai and Nao, Mai and Nao-chan in juuust~an itty~bitty little towel. Mmmmm. Yup~

Also, dat ending? Wow~ (Heart) That was absolutely heartwarming~ So precious, so in love, these two~ *A*

Great work, Yuri-chan~! Keep it up!

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Finally had enough free time to read this and man o wish I read it sooner. It took a little bit to remind myself who Naotora was but like her shyness it makes her much easier to approach especially with Mai being as outgoing as she is. These two look damn near inseparable and I like different situation they are in.

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Ohhhh this was soooo~cuuuuute~! *W* Like, oh my goodness, this was cuuuuute~! With a liiii'l wee bit of a dash o' pervy~ ;3 'Cuz hey, Mai plus rain plus Mai's boobs equals...mmmmmm! *O* That's such a vision of loveliness Nao-chan conjured up in mind's eye~

And haaaah, that Mai~ (Heart) Just bombarding her beloved Naotora with affection~ *W* Sooo~cute, so cute, so silleh, so warm, so fluffeh~

Great work! Keep'em comin'~! *W*
Update ASAP! That's an order!

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First off: Max-san, Ok. Alright. I'll take your word for it. But also, asking for characters in a story to have sex instead of commenting on the contents of the chapters themselves does *not* quality as a review.

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Haaah, Mai to the rescue! *O* That Akira broad will think twice, no, three times next time she wants to approach Naotora, Mai's beloved Nao-chan, with such mean-spirited, possessive, selfish intentions~

Naotora's so~precious and cute and luv and she does deserve more love. *W* She's just, she's such a cinnamon roll! Like, what in the world~? (Pouts)

Also, again, dat pyrokinesis of Mai's~ It suuuuure comes in handy, doesn't it~?

Great work! Advancing!

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Mike, all I want to say is I'm not that good at making reviews as good and as large as yours. So please don't judge. And I do have a life by the way. It pisses me off when people do this kind of shit! It makes me feel I should be fucking embarrassed! What did I do to deserve this?!

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First off: Max-san...you need to get a life. Your "reviews" are not reviews. Let me~show you how it's done, kid. Watch and learn. :P

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Haaah, dayum~ Oh my goodness, that was a sweeeet, beautiful, ohhh so beautiful, eye-pleasing and passionate start~ *3*

Dem kisses, ohhh dem kisses, Mai and her ninja onslaught of affection and kisses on her precious samurai girl...but puuuu~puuuu, Nao-chan isn't ready yet? QAQ Mou~! (Pouts) Hmph. :P C'mon, Nao-chan, you know you want it~! ;D

Still, this little disagreement simmered down and some more affection was sweetly shared~ *W* So cute, so cute, these two. X3

Great work, Yuri-chan~! This was so nice~!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

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Great story! I would like see more especially the the having sex.