Gods above this was beautiful, a huge shame to see it hasn't been updated in so long though :( Hope you come back to it, this story has rapidly become one of my favourites on this site!

Yep, I was right, this is bloody spectacular. 10/10 writing, instant favourite :D

Fucking LORD what a god tier opening chapter. You honestly captured that Pratchett feel and I cannot wait to see how this story goes :D

I do hope you start writing more for this soon...

Only three chapters so far, and I'm loving it. You have a way with humor, and this fic feels very, very fresh. A same it seems to have been discontinued. This one's an instant favourite. Kudos!

I'd love to see more of this. You really managed to nail Pratchetts brand of humor and applied it wonderfully to the world of Remnant.

A very interesting story, too bad its time has come to an end. Death has taken it away

I bet my ass Jaune lay down on Weisscream

Nice, you even got some of that Pratchett humor which is always a high bar. More?

why do i suspect that remnants lady has some rincewindian level plans for jaune?

I wonder if his friend will recognize him after the change?

it does seem that remnants death does have something of a different approach to things than his counterpart on the disc

MORT was quite the book, it should be cool to see your take on the concept

You'd think he would have a bit more confidence considering the work he's been doing. Doesn't seem like there's been any character dev

You really get the pratchett voice right.