| Reviews for Illicit Desires |
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   H A M B O . 1 7 chapter 1 . 7/26/2019 This is beautiful. I hope you'll continue this! Its really an art. And I'm craving for it. |
| LunarisHyuuga chapter 1 . 1/26/2019 Ow.. I was just starting to like it. Then it came to a stop. When will it be updated. |
| paradoxical.001 chapter 1 . 7/28/2018 I need more. |
| Lady Lavender Blue chapter 1 . 7/28/2018 Oh! You changed the title. I hope you continue this though. It's quite original (at least I haven't read Naruto-verse fan fictions where Sasuke and Hinata are adoptive siblings). And I wanna know how you'll go about their relationship. Been hoping for this, please do continue |
| College n Curls chapter 1 . 7/21/2018 Wow this is so beautifully written! I wish there was more! |
| WiseReader chapter 1 . 6/28/2018 * not streaky, my bad! |
| WiseReader chapter 1 . 6/28/2018 Wow, I really got some streaky vibes from both of them (sasuhina) BTW your writing, wording and descriptions is on point! I've not read plots like this, where Sasu gets taken in to Hyuga as a kind of step-sibling. Give us Mooooore! More! More! More! -claps happily- |
| Koen D chapter 1 . 6/28/2018 The plot is so interesting. I love the sibling bonds between Hinata and Sasuke and how he tried to comfort her after her heartbreak with Naruto was just so sweet. Please update! This story has so many potentials that shouldn't be abandoned :( |
| Lady Lavender Blue chapter 1 . 6/3/2018 Ok. I'm conflicted. Even though they're not blood-related, Hinata and Sasuke treated each other like siblings (at least for Hinata, don't know yet for Sasuke's POV). I looove SasuHina, but if they end up with each other, it'll feel like what they would be doing is incest. Still, I want to know how you'll go about this. I'm hoping you'll update, though... |
| kikyorocks543 chapter 1 . 10/9/2017 Please update this. This is amazing. |
| SolidPrometheus chapter 1 . 9/7/2017 When will the next chapter come |
| llth chapter 1 . 8/7/2017 I love, please continue |
| shikaruTo chapter 1 . 7/26/2017 This is an amazing chapter. I love the build up from childhood into teenhood (I assume they're in their late teens now). The chemistry is palpable, crackling underneath a seemingly calm surface of their relationship. It's a shame that the story is on hiatus, as it's a very promising premise. I hope you will find it in you to continue the story some time in the future. If not, this chapter is enough. Please never delete this beautiful story. |
| Hawaii unnie chapter 1 . 7/16/2017 I wonder what makes sasuke avoid hinata during their childhood and sasuke past got me curious plus the reason behind hiashi and the hyuugas acceptance towards taking sasuke in. I think hinata love sasuke since their childhood conciously without her realizing. It's ironic that hinata is closer to sasuke than hanabi and neji. hanabi and sasuke might get closer during their training and i bet hinata will get jealous |
| tayee chapter 1 . 7/5/2017 Love your stories! |
