Ok so I’m a huge fan and have read the original and the remastered and I’m so said to see you never posted the sequel! I love Paulina X Danny so muchhhh

Nice story. i really liked how you write Paulina and the interaction with the others. when i first read this i had a feeling it would good and it is and more than that, your writing really has a way to draw in and its interesting. Thx for the read!

That was a great story. I really didn't like Paulina before I read this fic. You did a great job giving her more personality and some kind of character development I expected her to have. Good job.
I like the ending although it is sort of disappointing because I was excited to see which paring you would choose. I was never happier with an open ending because I couldn't decide myself which pairing I'd prefer. Sorry for the bad language, I'm not a native speaker

Really loved this story! Only constructive criticism I have is that eventually 'Dash's Roof' probably should've been shortened for brevity's sake. Also just felt weird to see Dash's name get inserted into so many scenes multiple times. Maybe just say 'the roof', 'the party', even 'Dash's party' just to break it up. I say this because I got a similar critique on a story of my own I wrote for a school project. I used a single word multiple times in the story on purpose because I liked the symbolism, and it felt poetic to have this strong word reinforced again and again. But really, it was just distracting! Now I know to look through a story after I write it. I might see a displeasing pattern chapter to chapter that I wouldn't have otherwise noticed writing a chapter or two between long periods of time. (Not that I ever take a crack at anything I'm really seriously interested in). Paulina was a good character here btw.

Gosh I’m such a ball of mixed emotions. I am a Danny/Sam shipper, I am, but you wrote Paulina so WELL. You made her into a real person. But both the girls’ flaws stuck out. One is too pessimistic and bossy and the other is manipulative and a cheater. And I got angry at both of them for interfering. This was such a good fic. I have to admit I never read the original, but the writing in this one was very good. I hope the sequel is out. Gonna go check now. Gosh, I stayed up until 3 am reading this. Thanks for the read

Wow fuck you sam stupid goth ruining everything in the sequel she needs to fuck off and find someone else

Ooh some nice character development for Paulina, also the ending really was probably the most fair it could be. Paulina got Danny in a really underhanded way, but now it will be... well, fair. More fair. It really sucks that both Paulina and Sam like Danny and that he likes them both too. Ideal would be if Sam and Paulina somehow discovered feelings for each other as well and then all three would be happy together but... that seems really quite impossible, watching the girls' interactions.
And I feel really so bad for Danny, so much confusion, so many rejections and people liking only certain parts of him... It's really no surprise that he'd really want a break from it all. Hopefully whichever girl "wins", the other one will accept it and not try to ruin it out of anger of jealousy. And hopefully also still stay friends with Danny? (Yeah okay I'm mostly working here with the assumption that Danny goes for Paulina, because Danny and Sam had been friends for a long time and it'd be sad if their friendship ended because Danny is dating someone else.)

I like both. Not sure how I can decide. This one is good and that one is good. Hm.

XD IDK!

Ehhh, I honestly prefer the older story. I mean, this one may be written better and be a bit more... romantic? But you added in cursing and stuff now. :( I guess 11 years changes someone, but the other one made me happier since it was so clean.

But eh, just my opinion.

Interesting start! As a kid I hated Paulina and adored the trio, however, now as an adult I can see things much more differently. And rewatching the series, I was so upset at the wasted potential of Paulina. She is definitley more than just shallow. Her minor appearances in some eps, I think proved that. Somehow I also fell in love with the idea of this paring.

I also don't see Sam and Danny working out. Like I do like Sam, but she can come off pretty strong, to say the least. And with her intense and unchanging views, will be interesting to see how she may clash with Paulina for Danny's affections!

I look forward to reading the sequel! :D

I’ve been binging this all evening! It’s really good! :o Do you think you could at a note in your A/N about Sam/Paulina’s “go slit your wrists” thing? I kinda wasn’t expecting it...

Love it!

Very good. You explained how she only knew when he changed in front of her.

What? What has to be done?