Reviews for I Dont Want to See You Here Again
TheBritishBookWorm chapter 1 . 7/10
I like it... No i love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2019
I loved that.
Violet2971 chapter 1 . 4/30/2019
This was fun to read. I love long one-shots. So I do hope you do more though I don't have any ideas for it. The police stuff, yeah, I think there are small mistakes in it. For instance, self-defence is anot exception to murder if it was absolutely necessary. If Percy's father was going to be killed, then human nature wouldn't just let them kill him if he could have took them down. It's hard to believe that someone would just let someone else kill them if they could have done something about it. Anyways, an interrogation room usually has a mirror, though I can't be sure but that's how it is in all the crime shows I watch, and on the other side of the mirror is a room from where other officers usually watch. So Percy and Annabeth making out in the interrogation room...if anyone was watching, I'm not sure how Annabeth's reputation would be perceived by the other officers.
Anyways it was definitely a great read and I hope to read more from you. :D
RacingQueenofAmerica789 chapter 1 . 1/13/2019
This is the 7th time I have read this story and it is still as funny as ever! This is one of the best oneshots I have read for a long time! Continue your great writing and I wish you good luck!
smashed-ptato chapter 1 . 6/23/2018
This was hilarious well done go buy ur self an ice cream ;)
AnnaUnicorn chapter 1 . 3/8/2018
You should continue this, because in your description it says he stops committing crimes but in the story he never does.
SoulHorse chapter 1 . 2/26/2018
Oh damnn this is steamy lol
Did I mention how much I love your fics? They're super original and I'm in love aha (i won't read your multi chap yet because iz hella long and I'm waiting for friday lol)
Anyhoo great work and I love these !
sapphirelg chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
This was a great one shot I loved it (are u proud that I am reading this at a decent time and not 2am
Fualcrum Tano chapter 1 . 12/9/2017
Nice. Annabeth should of used Percy liking her to her advantage before they continued on with their... um... interaction. She could of got him to promise not to end up at the police station first. But anyway, Yet again an amazing story. Well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2017
Honestly I'm kinda in shock. Really good fhough
Dimitri Jinx chapter 1 . 8/28/2017
Nooooo! This can't be a one shot it NEEDS to continue! It was fantastic!
Stargazer1300 chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
Such a beautiful story that didn't start out this way but later tells you what people will do in the name of love. Sequel?
Percabeth824 chapter 1 . 7/11/2017
Flip! I liked it a lot! I loved it in fact! One thing to let you know though, is that in interrogation rooms there are cameras and I highly doubt that an officer would kiss a criminal in there. But to be honest with you... I'm kind of glad you didn't mention them because I enjoyed that.
PaL14 chapter 1 . 7/9/2017
Oh my gods... This was... I don't know... Well... You've rendered me speechless. This was well... Intense is the word I'm looking for... Well-written is another word and just Pure Awesomeness. That's like Three or five words... That's all I can say right now. It's just... The moments... And the Persassiness... And the Bad-A Annabeth. Really well put together. Maybe a second part to this? When they're already together would be spectacular. When he stops committing crimes just for her and gets a new life. That would be extremely cute. Yeah and that's it. Loved this.
Forex chapter 1 . 7/6/2017
This story is great
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