The problem with reviews is that everyone has their own opinions as to what is right or wrong with anything that they can give voice on. I believe that artist whom never read reviews of their work are most likely happier with their craft long term. Most seem to want the accolades of their peers. So they read reviews. If it is important for you to know what readers think of your story, you might try a couple of things. First note that FFN a while back deleted the ability to turn off guest reviews. Made a lot of writers upset. If you have already read a review that bashes you from someone, do not bother with reading another from them. Just delete it when you see the bashers name or if it is from someone not signed in. Second thing is the long author notes about the bashing. Not only does it distract from your story, it gives forum to and legitimizes their actions to them. The more forum you give to them, the more they know they are getting under your skin. The more right they think they are. Even though I dislike long author notes, the fact is I find your story highly enjoyable. I have reread it at least ten times from the start as new updates come out. I just skip most all long updates. I do read omakes though. They are something extra added to the story, not a rehashing as some writers do with a/n's. So when you read an idiot wanting you to keep you story the same as cannon remember, that is called plagiarism not fanfiction. Thanks for keeping us entertained with your story.

I would like to keep reading but I understand your schedule. The lot of us have jobs

it's a decent story but I'm just not a big fan of nym in this story she is just too immature for me but it's still a solid story

I gotta love the chaos! The Potter luck keeps striking! Poor Harry. No such thing as a vacation. So what's going to happen to Vlad? And the younger Stark, Pepper and Rhodey? I can't wait to see what is unleashed next!

Nice chapter

Really like the scenes with anty hela.

Noticed they did not tell harry that his mum has made an appearance.
That should be a pleasant surprise when he gets back to newyork

Will Wanda maximoff will be the last wife of harry potter in the lady circle

I loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it.

Oof. The opening needs a serious reworking. There's a bunch of things you got wrong. Like for example "You really don't remember much, do you?". Why is there a "really" in that sentence? She just got her first hint that he might not remember last night. It should've been "You don't remember much, do you?" to fit the context of the scene. A sentiment like "You REALLY don't..." comes after Harry's asked for clarification once before. It's so obviously wrong I wanted to assume it was an editing mistake rather than a conscious choice to write the sentence that way.

Then there's the way you tossed out them being married like it wasn't interesting. The other girls weren't even awake! You didn't give that moment the weight it deserved when it's actually what this entire challenge was based around. Make it dramatic, exciting and give reactions so we can see how big of a deal it is! This is by far the biggest issue I had. I was reading with a slight grin but this moment instantly made it drop. It's more than half the reason I was even trying this story and it ended up being such a cr*ppy moment! You should've led up to the grand reveal with some small talk between people waking up in such an awkward position and established the moment better. It deserved an entire conversation, not a quick info dump so he could be made aware. Oh yeah, we're married now. Anyways,... Oh, Hey Coulson!

Then the way Coulson swooped in with his judgment like a complete d*uchebag instead of showing any kind of humor for the situation his friend found herself in. Did you not want him to be liked by your readers because that scene would certainly make that happen. In fact it actually did. I don't like your Coulson. First impressions stick around and his first impression is he's a d*ck.

Who knows where where you're going to take the story form here, but this was hardly a promising introduction, you know? I know I've been harsh, but these were my genuine reactions to the chapter :/

Nice start - thanks for the chapter!
English is not my mother tongue, syntax is not my strength: I am not the one to correct others definitely. That said, please note:
“Their” is not “They are” (or “They’re”)

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

Personally, I hope that Vlad attempts something and then finds out what an angry Hela is capable of. With him being a halfling, he falls partially into her domain.

Was that a de-aged Tony and group?

love the update can hardly await the next chapter

I’ll be honest here, Harry seems kind of pathetic. I know you’re just starting to show that he’s slightly capable but even tho he managed to convince Nat and Laura he was going to fight the destroyer, he did nothing. There was literally no point to him being there. This blushing child you’re making him, is becoming too much for me

You need stop with the "sighing" and "flinching" all the time.

Excellent story! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter..