wow

love this

I love Sigyn already! She's great. The scene where She asked if Thor and Jane would care for the baby if something happened to her, was moving.

I love that Sleipnir toy too!

Finally I have time to continue reading this!
There was some really disturbing Norse mythology in this chapter too! XD
You must've done an incredible amount of research for this chapter, and you have managed to tie it all up nicely. I loved the ending, where all the Avengers agreed on keeping Dot safe. A lovely scene.

I had wondered if Loki was really dead! I didn't know if you had removed that part of The Dark World from this fic. Even better for Sigyn, she knows that Loki is posing as Odin, so where is Odin? Heehee

Wow, this is such an amazing story! Why haven't I found this before? This taught me more about Norse mythology than what I read on Wikipedia and the books I bought, because I could barely understand it. And you totally made me see Loki from a different perspective!

What an entrance! And shock-induced labor. Startling for all involved. I loved Tony's panicked laugh.
I liked how you gave the bounty hunter a back story. He's not an evil dude, just got roped into this. (his partner might show up too) I also liked the difference between Asgardian/Vanir pregnancy and human pregnancy - different time frames! I'm sure the human women are all wincing at the idea of being pregnant for 3 years.

Woah. Nice. I really like how you have portrayed Sigyn! (lol, the magic bag she has) I'm eager to read more... (and I shall do so)

Wow, you've really done some research on Norse mythology! Loki does have a lot of kids in the legends, though thinking about it makes me a bit uncomfortable. I mean, his kids are a zoo! :D I liked how you write about it, though, through Thor's memories. You write Thor very well, I think.

I also enjoyed the part where they were taking care of little Dot. :) I can totally see Thor changing nappies, adorable!

Another enjoyable chapter, I definitely want to continue reading!

I loved the part where the baby puked on Thor. :D Haha, he had it coming for being so uptight!
I liked the parts where you wrote about Thor's feelings towards the tiny newborn, and I'm curious to find out how things will develop. You are a skillful writer, and it's impressive how you make this many characters work.

A very nice Chapter, I liked this a lot! It was exciting, and made me want to keep on reading to know what's going to happen next! I like Sigyn a lot, and I'm worried for her (giving birth is no easy business!) and I hope things go well. I also liked the way you managed to keep this chapter together, with so many characters and a lot of things happening. Nice writing!

An interesting beginning to a story. I will definitely want to read on!

I had a bad day at work, so I slam-read both prequels while eating chocolate twinkies for dinner. The twinkie were awesome. So are your stories! I love how you have woven both of these tales, and flipped Odin's old character 180 degrees! I was so enthralled, I totally forgot that Loki was still alive, and impersonating Odin!
I do hope that the two wolf-brothers will be freed soon, so the family can be reunited. That might be worth a quest. Just saying...
I look forward to more. Happy writing, and thanks for fixing my Friday night!

I have never felt such feels in an avengers story that did not involve peter parker. I freaking love loki, and this story just makes me affirm it.

Occurs to me also, that for the 'treason' charges against Sigyn, that meets that Lyra is acknowledged as indeed the heir to the throne if Thor's decision to abdicate his own right as prince stands. That would also mean, the issue of the 'Odin' really being Loki aside, that Loki's status as a member of the royal family has been (posthumously, wink, wink) re-instated.
Sure, could be dismissed by nobles as a ploy by 'Odin' to keep others from being the heir (he had a few more sons after all, open and not I believe) from being someone else, with a malleable baby being preferable...ugh, some might target Lyra just for that...