I didn't think I would get this angry for a fanfic but ozpin is a fucking retard here and goodbitch is a karen here...ugh. The book was good till ozpin started acting like some paranoid piece of shit.
Well I will just go read shiro fucking and raping all girls in rwby to quell my rage. farewell.

Damn! What a great story!
I just hope you keep updating it
Keep the great work!

Much better! I read the original, but this is a clear improvement! The original wasn't quite up to my standards in writing quality, but this certainly is.

Yeahhhh, you don't precisely inspire faith in a good story when you manage to spell 'prologue' wrong, yanno?

This has been a good read I hope you update soon.

Dude please continue this story it's very good and I want to see you continue it

great story keep it up but I wish natsu permanetly injuryed or as least serverly injured cardin after it is not like a prison can hold natsu with his strength. thanks

I hope you someday finish this tale

Please continue this story because I love what you did in this story and I'm also now shipping Blake And Brand together.

Honestly so god-damned glad this story is up and running again. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I liked the chapter!

Natsu had better not just accept his punishment like last time, knowing Cardin won't get punished. He should just say "No, if Cardin isn't being punished I'm not accepting punishment either." And none of that "You already punished him, so now you get punished" crap.

Lol "I punch things and walk places." That cracked me up for some reason. It's too bad you didn't reincarnate natsu as Jaune :p

Im really glad you made Natsu not take shit from anyone! Please keep him like this, and dont change it even for comical reasons, i cant explain how infuriating it is whenever i see or read that. Loved the chapter and cant wait for the next one!

-ATNF

Bruh this whole chapter was so insightful and well done but the ending was hilarious !

KEEP BEING AWESOME!