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This story is amazing so far and I can’t wait to be able to read more. I also have a bit of constructive criticism for you. In Endymion’s civilian name, you have the O and the U switched. It should be Mamoru. If you are trying to use the Japanese name of each character, Pluto is Setsuna and Molly’s name in the sub version of the anime is Naru. Other than that I see nothing that has to be addressed. Again, the story is amazing so far, so keep up the great work.

sooooo good!

Hey there first off I love your story IT IS AWESOME. secondly are you going to pair up the rest of the guardians (Ami,Mako,Michiru,Trista) THEY NEED SOME LOVE TOO DAMN IT. I really really really love how Luna gets told off it's about time someone put that damn fur ball in her rightful place. Other than that keep up the good work and please update again soon.
(PS in case you didn't know Trista's Japanese name is Setsuna)

I love this story so far and can't wait to see what happens with the scouts and the four heavenly kings - especially with Rei and Jadeite. The scene's with Mamoru, Usagi, and Haruka are the one's I look forward to most - so please write more moments of those three together. This story is amazing, and I can't wait for it to update.

Wish there was more separate Usagi/Haruka time. I see Usagi wants her scouts to happy and in love too. So is Usagi resurrecting the Shintennou for sailor scouts as well as to help defend her? I'm Chad/Rei , Minako/Setsuna, Ami/Makoto, Malachite/Zoisite, Naru/nephrite fan but I can see where this might be going.

who is usagi's other soulmate?

Good work of course

Has Ray truly learned her lesson?

Great update.

Nice update.

Good update. Yeah, she really shouldn't have gotten on the worst side of Mamoru when his Endymion self came out.
Now that she's locked up in Elysium, will she have to deal with Helious as a guard?

Will Mars smarten up?

Go Haruka and Minako in defending Usagi!
Loving this story so far, Rei had it coming.