And won't that just burn the ginger twat's pretensions to the ground! Sounds like Ronniekins should have been the one writing "I must not tell lies" with Umbitch.

Hermione - take note of the fact that Ronniekins is pissing and moaning about being given tasks to help prepare the castle for the siege that is immanent.

Good on Harry for telling Easy Weasley that she has nothing that he is interested in. Given that it is likely that he will live through this (big assumption here, but one I think is safe), I hope he manages to hold that line against her, her harpy of a mother, her lazy ass brother, and wizarding world who expects them to be together because she happens to resemble his mother. Does no one in that world know about Oedipus?

Totally with you on that whole "I'm the evilest of the evil villains ever, and I am now going to talk you to death for the next hour and a half to give you time to plan and execute an escape". That is part of the reason why Indiana Jones watching the show off with the swords got exasperated and just shot him. Boom. Done.

Ginger twat extraordinaire.

Yeah, the pain of rummaging through a brain that is almost a virgin territory. To bad - for someone who is supposed to be so good at chess he shows a frighteningly lack of awareness of how his behavior impacts how others see him. That whole thing about why can't the French just speak English like proper people is only the least part of it. (I'm seeing Howler Molly's subtle influence there.)

Stay at Shell Cottage, replenish their strength, and leave. And leave the weak link behind. Sorry but not sorry. Ron has proved that he is the most likely to break under the pressure of being around a horocrux, and given the fact that there are more to come he's just to big a risk to their safety. Send him to stay with LavLav.

A very good story, even great, but it feels unfinished. Does Harry have two wives? How many children? The last scene suggests that they are all in the bath together, why not a little more?

I think I never finished reading this series before, which is a pity, as it’s really a lovely story. I greatly enjoyed rereading everything all over and finally finishing it. Thanks for writing!

I liked that there were realistic consequences. I don’t think I liked the uncertain ending in regards to Ron and Hermione, but I just don’t approve of ghosting in general. I think the addition of Luna was interesting and sweet, tho a little unexpected. Thanks!

A really good story.
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful talent.

I didn’t think that any ending could leave me more unsatisfied than JKR’s, but you’ve proved me wrong. You completely bungled up what would have such a promising story. Wow, what a mess.
LoA.

and this one got me in the possibility of LunarHarmony

Um, not to nitpick, but your reasoning here about Warming Charms disobeying the First Law of Thermodynamics (albeit correct in a lot of ways) would then be incorrect in the first chapter. There, Harry cast a Warming Charm on Hermione's blanket, and then put his own blanket on top of that.

okay I must say this is one of the best fics I read it was mostly well thought and reasoned , very realistic as well

Don't apologize in AN's for having a live. Almost done except for epilog.

In canon - at least film Luna buggered off back to Hogwarts. That was a waste. She really could have added perspective.